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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Lala
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Rain,

This is some great fiction. You have a wonderful writing style and the flow of the story is excellent and realistic. You deserve to be nominated. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the outstanding work!

Lala
person SanityEscapesMe
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I dont think I ever read this type of story before. Everyone always writes about them falling for each other once they get to seven year. Or Hermione ususually gets all pretty before the new school year and that\'s when Draco notices her. I really like this take of yours. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to read the next chapter. I really like how things are moving slowly also.
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY. An Update. I was starting to think you had writers block but you\'re back Yay. I can\'t wait for more updates. Keep up the good work. I absolutly love a story where they aren\'t already married or together right away.
person Maureen (CloudySkieZ)
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, you blow me away with your very discriptive scenes...I was tingling at the point where he said \"peche\"

*moans*

Ok nuff said, HOLLA BACK GIRL
person lorett
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHhhhhh! RAIN!

HOW can you DO this to me?

You start me off all excited and expectant and then it gets going along and I\'m like, WHEE!!!!!!!!!!!

AND THEN...just when I\'m snuggling down into my VERY uncomfortable office chair to get all into the chappie....

IT ENDS!!!!!!!!

I was like, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

OY, you\'re such a tease!

This was fabulous, as always!

LOVE IT!

NEED IT!

WANT MORE!

QUICKLY!

Lovin it more all the time.

Lorett
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is \"drool\"
person saytheya
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol I love hermione. she\'s so twitchy. she\'s going to need loads of practice before she\'s comfortable. either that or she\'ll have to get over it being draco touching her. update soon please!!
person Liz
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good, but such a tease! You really write Draco and Hermione well. I love the way they interact (in this story and your other one, Obscurity). You\'ve got me really wondering how these storylines are going to play out, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON, on both stories!!!! I\'m chopping at the bit for some good fan fiction.
person Dracodea
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... I love this whole \'practice\' thing, and Draco is just so, for lack of a better word, smooth.
person Gracie
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate reading your stories. They are so amazing. The best fics on this site. But you take so long to update! It makes me want to wait until you are finished a fic before I even start reading it. The wait is painful. You\'re vicious!
Like every other story you have written, this is top-notch. Of course I\'ll go vote because you deserve to win. But you are cruel....so very cruel....so very Slytherin!