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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Elmo
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love how Hermione reacts to Draco\'s touch! its so cute! and, i love the fact that Patil was understanding and realized what an ass Ron is...

so...how long do you think you need to update again? I\'ll give u 10 minutes....
person Lady T
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please keep writing!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ron is a hypocritical bastard! Lovin\' it! I hope Hermione hexes him a few more times before this fic is over, that is, if it ever has to end. It doesn\'t right? I could read it for a lifetime.
person Know-it-all
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutley loved this chapter! so so hot! I almost died. Honest. Keep up the good work.
person Danielle
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written. It is so refreshing to find someone who will actually take the time to crreate a good plot line and not rush. I really like your characterizations. I am not usually a fan of stories that villanize Ron, but I really like this story. Thank you for taking the time to create a well written story that I can enjoy without noticing errors and illogical reasoning or bad characterizations.
person Rooshka.
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please! A well written and original tale!
person Kaye
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!! This is fabulous! What a wonderful story! Please keep up the great work. I can\'t wait for more!
person 1red1
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... just found this and I\'m really enjoying it!
I think you kept all the characters in character very well
(although obviously you needed to bastardify Ron for the purposes of your story).

I loved the flying scene, and the kiss... *swoon*

Can\'t wait to see how this progresses.
PLEEEEASE update soon!!!!!!!!
person Kit
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. I vote that he call her bella, its the sweet endearment that isn\'t too cute or too gushy, like sweetums or muffin, but isn\'t crude or stupid, like baby. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. You have a very clever witty style to your writting, and I look forward to reading more.
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that i will be nominating this story as i adore it. Hmm peaches, i think Draco could really embarress Hermione and get some tongues wagging with that one!

Bring on the next chapter, more Draco the better!

This story is getting better and better, keep it up!

Fallenrose