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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person asher
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
want more! ... please... =)
person Ava
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story! I was so happy to see it updated. I meant to leave a review sooner, but I hadn\'t got around to it. Anyway, you write so well, and I love the whole plot of this story. Especially this chapter. Too bad Ron had to come along. ;) Although it that was the point of the snogging session. Great job! I\'ve also been reading Obsurity (I hadn\'t got around to reviewing there either! I\'m terrible, I know!), and I can\'t wait to read more of it as well. :)
person Zoltaire the Inscrutable
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I was going to wait until I had completed all chapters before reviewing. BUT.... the \'Dragons don\'t make good pets\' line was too too good to pass up. That was great, and thanks to you, I will be thinking that from now on when I read a Dramione pairing. that was great. As for the rest of the story so far, I am really enjoying it. The whole make Ron jealous thing, but Draco\'s take on seperating himself and his name as far from his father as possible is pretty unique. Great job on great writing and a great plot.

Zoltaire the Insructable
person moxie
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, this story is amazing. very entertaining and I LOVE reading it. thank you SO much for updating!! yay! what a treat! i love the premise. Draco\'s a pro - yum. I wonder how he reacted to their kiss...?
person elisha
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! i couldn\'t even belive that you upfated so quickly!! you are soooo my HERO!!!!! i looove this story!!! OMG, i loved the set up, him all buisness-like, her all nervous and changing her mind, then all forgotten.....sooooo good! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! :)
person lorett
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RAIN...Rain...Rain...

I LOVE IT!

I WANT MORE!

FINALLY some good, ol fashioned snogging! YIPPEE!

MORE! MORE! MORE!

Wonderfully done. You\'re VERY GOOD with the kissing scenes. I\'m completely involved and lost in the moment.

Bravo.

Ready for more.

Love you!

L
person MICHELLE
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAAAAAAA SOMEONE\'S JEALOUS. THE GIT RON. I HATE HIM. I LOVE DRACO. GOOOOOOO DRACO. LOL
UPDATE SOON.
person shell
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this new story. The reactions of the characters are believable and funny. I hope to read a lot more of it, and hope that it continues to be as fun. - Shell
person 1red1
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh that was perfect!!!! You create such lovely chemistry between them, and the way you do it it doesn\'t seem old or already done.
I loved that scene and I\'m really enjoying this story!

and an update so soon!!!! :D
I checked here today, barely hoping that there would be a new chpater so soon after I last reviewed, but here it is! yay!
I feel like I got a suprise birthday present or something... LOL

I have this mortal fear that whenever I find a story that I really like, that the author is going to desert it!
So please please contunue this, I can\'t wait for the next update. :)
person Alana
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter, I loved it how you described both of the characters, it is very well done. And loved in particular this scene :