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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person HiddenAllusion
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This seems to just get better and better with each chapter. I absolutely love it... I\'m not very good at saying why or how, but I do. Thanks for adding me to your update list, too; it made my day to see an update so soon! Thanks for another great chapter.
person kit
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my favorite fanfics with draco/herm... I love how it all started out to get revenge, and how both the characters remain true to themselves. Are you going to take this into their 7th year? I really hope you do, cuz it\'s an amazing story!
person lunastar
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! You finally updated! This story is going so well.
And finally, some action between Draco and Hermione.
very well written. Update soon.
person Bambu
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 was a terrific chapter... you\'ve suddenly altered the entire dynamic with the snogging session. Suddenly it\'s real for both Hermione and Draco, and even if Ron hadn\'t meant to hurt Hermione I think his actions rather clarify his intentions for all to see: it was about Malfoy, not Hermione. I think the shove was a very effective device in demonstrating the fact that Ron doesn\'t think about Hermione as a lover, even if you mentioned it, you almost didn\'t need to. I\'m most interested in seeing how Draco reacts to the fact that Ron shoved Hermione, and how Hermione will \'heal\' Draco... not to mention their rather heated reaction to the other. (On an editorial note, this chapter was very clean from a beta perspective... well done, Rain.)
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.

Did I mention that I like your story? :)
person Petalsoft
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such a hot chapter! Love it love it love it

Your ideas for this story are fantastic. Keep up the good work and I\'m excited for more!
person cat
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best yet- I love both your stories and this chapter of Jealousy was amazing. The hottest Draco ever- I can\'t wait for he and Hermione to \"soothe each other\'s wounds\" later. It\'s a thing of beauty.
person Liz
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter, I must say! Your interactions between Draco and Hermione are sweat-inducing, and that is a compliment. Not many fan fic authors can make characters that believable, so pat yourself on the back for knowing them so well. Update again soon!!! That goes for Obscurity as well!!!!! (Not asking too much, am I?)
person KawaiiRyu
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Lovely. I am in love with this story. Hermione\'s reaction to the makeout session--so real, so hot. I can\'t wait for more!
person ~Sakurashope7~
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!