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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Alana
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I absolutely loved this chapter, cos it was so fucking good! And honesty I think that this fic is one of the best d/hr fics I\'ve ever read! I totally loved the scene when Draco and Hermione were making out, cos the scene was so hot and also very sweet. You\'re very good at describing scenes and of course the characters. Good job! And the scene that really got me cracking was when Ron found them, it was hilarious. That was simply priceless!
You\'ve got to update real soon, cos I really want to now what\'s gonna happen?
Alana
person sharkbait
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re doing an awesome job!!! Thanks for updating . . . two whole chapters . . . so quickly . I\'m so glad Hermione finally lightened up a little. LOVED the makeout session! Keep up the good work . . . and the updates :). I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person Jade
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you updated! Even faster than I had expected! :) Great chapter, by the way! Update soon!
person Sunny June
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Rain! All the hub-bub about your story is in fact spot on! It\'s fantastic! I\'ve only gotten through two chapters, but I simply love it. . . I think it was BRILLIANT how you had Granger and Malfoy lay down the terms right off the bat - no nonsense and Hermiome made sure to lay it down the way she wants it. . . Oh man I can just SEE how great this story is going to be. The only thing I\'m concerned about is why would Ron dump her and then try and make her jealous? It\'s one of those weird things that happens when people break up. I know one of my exes who dumped me went off about two months later how I was a huge witch and he hated me . . . apparently it was easier for him to be mad at me than to be my friend because he knew he was a punk . . . GOSH boys are dumb. In fact, that ex rather reminds me of Ron . . . he was a red head. . . WOW, look at me make this review all about me . . . WHOOPS!

AMAZING story so far girl . . . love it!

SJ
person Kitiara Starfire
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a fabulous story. I can\'t wait for more.
person Brittney
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I don\'t know how I missed it until now but I am soo glad that I have finally come across it. If you would email me when you update I would really appreciate it.
person LucKyo (not logged in)
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this! I\'m positively gushing over it. Hermione and Draco do make a really hot team and pissing Ron off has it benefits too. Great story. I have to add this to my favorites.
person Anna
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
person abby
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!!!

I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE this story. I don\'t usually review fanfiction too much, but this one is just so good, I had to give you some encouragement to finish it (and quickly!!). I have read and reread the chapters you have written thus far. Please keep it coming.

Teddy Bear Hugs
(to you and your muse)

Abby
person Soranji
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG super fast update. Great chapter. I liked the fight scene, I bet Malfoy didn\'t expect Ron to hid him. I love the action between Draco and Hermione. Update soon.