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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was soooooooo good please please please update soon. i really like the thing where she said she\'d tell harry if he did it again and that p helped her get up. draco was great in the fight too.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I simply loved your fic! The story is light, but well developed, I can\'t wait for next chapter! Please update soon!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love both this story and obscurity...you are so amazingly talented! i really like this one though because its very original. i can NOT wait to see what happens and i check both your stories everyday to see if theyre updated...
GREAT story...its my favorite of all the ones ive read on this site, update soon please please please please!!!
GREAT story...its my favorite of all the ones ive read on this site, update soon please please please please!!!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are an incredibly talented writer... ur story flows so smoothly and u have me captivated. Please update soon
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Rain,
I love it!!! So many times I\'ve wanted to get revenge on a boyfriend who treated me in this way but I\'ve never had the courage to do it! Ahhh... if only I had my own personal Draco to help me out! That would be... erm... handy! Hee hee!
Anyway, this story is brilliant! I\'ve read stories before where jealousy is the main theme but those other stories do not compare to yours! Your writing is brilliant and very effective. The gradual stages of Draco\'s plan is moving along just at the right pace and I love the he\'s so confident and Hermione is so squirmy (I think that\'s the right word to explain it!).
Ron is such a meany!!! I definitely know how it feels to have a boyfriend finish with you and then turn up to a big social event with another girl with him being all over her and everyone talking about it... (I\'m not bitter... honest!) and it\'s definitely not nice! I got my revenge by turning all his friends against him for a while and from me not speaking to him but it wasn\'t as effective as this method would have been!
I can\'t wait to see what happens nect so update soon!!
AnnieXxX
I love it!!! So many times I\'ve wanted to get revenge on a boyfriend who treated me in this way but I\'ve never had the courage to do it! Ahhh... if only I had my own personal Draco to help me out! That would be... erm... handy! Hee hee!
Anyway, this story is brilliant! I\'ve read stories before where jealousy is the main theme but those other stories do not compare to yours! Your writing is brilliant and very effective. The gradual stages of Draco\'s plan is moving along just at the right pace and I love the he\'s so confident and Hermione is so squirmy (I think that\'s the right word to explain it!).
Ron is such a meany!!! I definitely know how it feels to have a boyfriend finish with you and then turn up to a big social event with another girl with him being all over her and everyone talking about it... (I\'m not bitter... honest!) and it\'s definitely not nice! I got my revenge by turning all his friends against him for a while and from me not speaking to him but it wasn\'t as effective as this method would have been!
I can\'t wait to see what happens nect so update soon!!
AnnieXxX
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh happy day! It was wonderful to see that this had been updated when I checked in today. It was hot and funny, I can just hear the panic in her voice as Draco lays her out, setting up the scene. The fact that they both got lost in it is what makes it so good. I bet Padma reads Ron the riot act about his actios while he\'s still petrified. *snicker* Hermione threatened to tell Harry, that is inspired. And what is Draco thinking about through all of this???? Hopefully we find out in the next chapter as well as some more snogging.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowowowowowow.................................... I\'m so totally into this story; I followed this link from Dangerous Liaisons, and now am totally going to look up your other stories.............
Another thing; do you have your own website? To put up your work? I\'m asking this (usually I ask AFF authors this) because AFF has thess technical errors in uploading where sometimes ends of chapters are cut off or some words are mangled or sentences are strung together, or even when parts of the middle are missing...you catch my drift. There\'ve been so many stories I\'ve read like that. I\'m asking because, if you had a site, I could just go there and read your work instead of the possible risk in AFF.
In any case, things are just heating up and getting started here on \"Jealousy\"... I *SO* can\'t wait for the next installment. Happy writing! ^^
Another thing; do you have your own website? To put up your work? I\'m asking this (usually I ask AFF authors this) because AFF has thess technical errors in uploading where sometimes ends of chapters are cut off or some words are mangled or sentences are strung together, or even when parts of the middle are missing...you catch my drift. There\'ve been so many stories I\'ve read like that. I\'m asking because, if you had a site, I could just go there and read your work instead of the possible risk in AFF.
In any case, things are just heating up and getting started here on \"Jealousy\"... I *SO* can\'t wait for the next installment. Happy writing! ^^
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was really hot and heavy! I\'m glad to finally see some touching between those two. Whew! :3 I really really hope you update soon. I\'m eager to find out what happens next :D