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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person elle6778
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Loved the way Hermione reacted to Draco even though it all started as a business arrangement. The snog session was well done and I love the way Hermione wanted Draco to deck Ron! Keep up the good work and please update soon!
person doofus
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, I was going to read this but the sidescroll is making it too difficult to read. Any chance you could do something about it?
person Nina
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is coming along wonderfully!!!! I can\'t wait to see where D/Hr will go next *wink*
pleaseplease update soon
person Ev
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update dammit! I\'m awaiting your next chapter. You\'re an amazing writer...even more amazing if you updated soon. Seriously, you\'re story is splendid and I\'m hooked.
person Carla
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, love this fic. I can\'t believe I only stumbled upon it just now... And I can\'t believe it\'s not yet done! You have to update!
person sarah
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a nice, original plot bunny. i love it.
person lorrif
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a gift. Ilove reading your stories. The only hard part is waiting for the next installment!!!
person D1M3
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! You have got to update soon! The snogging session, the plan and everything was totally hottt!!!
person Julie
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, please update
person Ev
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story! Update soon dammit!