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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person m
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastic! definatelya favorite of mine
I can\'t wait to see it continue
person luna luck
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!!! Please update soon you are a very talented writer.
person Petalsoft
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter, but too short!!! I want more. LOL The sexual tension is killing me.
person moxie
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Meep. Even though, yes, it is short, thank you so much for posting what you have. I love this story and have been waiting on an update.
person cruttan
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad that you posted what was done- it was wonderful! I especially enjoyed the peek into Draco\'s psyche. The last two chapters especially were incredibly hot- the sexual tension seems almost tangible.

I was SO excited when I saw that you had updated, and I was definitely not disappointed!
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT!!! I love this story!
When I saw this, I didn\'t put two and two together to realize what it was... I have run over this a couple of times before finally reading it tonight- Now i\'m glad I did! I have read this another site that you write for, and I reviewed for it as well. Practically begging you to update.
When I read this and realized it was the same thing, I knew from the first paragraph - I was so happy! I read it all over again anyhow.
I really wish you would update! The story is so good, TOO good to not be updated so long! But I\'m sure you are thinking of AWESOME things to come, only because all the other chapters have been just great.
Please update soon!
PEACE Isa
person risika
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love how subtle and descriptive you are with their feelings. it makes the story that much better.
all in all, IT IS AWESOME SO FAR!!!!!
and you need to update quickly before i become insane.
person ChasteBlush
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is brilliant, i love the way the plot is going, we need some more chance meetings like that, but nmay i suggest you spread the word through others catching them as well so that Ron hears it form gossips all the time rather than just catching them occasionally. Its your story of course so tell me to shut up if you\'d like but hey, its an idea.

As i said, this is a brillaint story, i am really loving it, please update sooon,
x x x
person Serentipity01
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! Reluctant attraction and thorough snogging sessions! Love it love it love it love it! Please update soon! I loved to read some of it from Draco\'s point of view. Padma comes across really nice too - some female bonding in the making? Anyway, amazing stuff, keep it coming! ;)
person jessysgirl
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You. Must. Update. I love this story! Your writing makes me feel like I\'m there with them. You have something here. And I could totally see Draco doing something like this to get to his father, especially after the way he acted in HBP. Not totally OOC!