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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Evil Saint
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Moira
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I truly do adore this story! It has a bit of everything in it, and I doubt that there is a man alive that could top the Beautiful Bad Boy Dragon that is Draco Malfoy! I beg of you, on my hands and knees, Please Please Please update soon!
person Aeri.
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue! i love the story it has a plot,
well sorta andd there\'s romance instead of just sex!
i want my own draco playtoy,
lol sry just bein me!

anywho... yeah plzzzzzzzz continue
person moon
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh ! what a pleasure to discover that you\'ve updated you story \'jealousy\' ! Don\'t worry, even if it is short, this chapter is still amazing !
I love that Draco\'s realisation ...I love you description style...

Please, update soon ! I can\'t wait for more !

Congratulations for Dangerous Liaisons awards !

Moonie
xxx
person KageMage15
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update this??
person Bulma
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GODS!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!! THIS STORY IS GREAT!! I just love how you get the intensity between the two. I mean whoah. I haven\'t read something that intense since Laurel K. Hamiltons latest novel. I\'m grouping you with her and she\'s my fave writer. Feel very happy. I\'m so glad found your fic, it\'s really hard to find a great story and I hope you continue it. Most of the good ones I find are the ones that people give up on. I hope that\'s not you. you\'re really great and I can\'t wait to read more.

Love,
Bulma
person Grace
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It rocks!!! Please write more soon! ^_^
person DB2020
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I absolutely love your story! One of the best I\'ve read, and I feel like its only just begun. Wow, well great chapter, I can\'t wait for your next update ^_^
person RahNee
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Rain! You updated my favorite story of yours. Heh heh... Draco realizes he\'s in trouble. Got a little more than you bargained for, eh, Draco? Didn\'t expect to be attracted to her didja? Heh heh heh. I LOVE IT. Looks like Draco will need to brush up on HIS acting skills now!

I am so enjoying this fic of yours. It is so much fun to see their little plot quickly spiralling out of control... I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Please add me to your mailing list for when you update, otherwise I just hear it through the grapevine at the group site, later. I don\'t want to waste a minute that I could be reading your fabulous story!

Short, sure, but I really liked the introspection of Draco. So delish!
Love you!
Ronnie
person Jaiden McKenzie Carter
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more please! :) BUMP BUMP