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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great plot, really original. update soon!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I love this story of yours the most!
person bulma
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, hope you update soon.
person Karen
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy I read this. I love stories like this and you do a fantastic job of capturing the characters. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, this story is great. Keep it up!
person yoshi09
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahahahahaha i love it sooo much! i laughed out loud a lot, and i think it's just SO cute. oh my GOD you have got to update!!! i'm sending this fic to my friend to read, she'll love it!!
person rampage5191
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Hr/D fictions I have read, and let me tell you that I have read a LOT. You not only presented a great situation to bring Hermione and Draco together, but you also excecuted this plan with a great vocabulary selection, whilst managing to keep all personalities in character (a feat which is very difficult to reach, seeing as two people who loathe eachother are now expected to fall in love in the short span of a few chapters). I commend you on your extraordinary job with this story so far, and I hope that we (myself and all your reviewers and readers) can look foward to more chapters in the future. Please don't give up or abandon this idea, because so far, it has been truly spectacular. Writing is challenging, but isn't challenging yourself with new ideas and words what writing is essentially about?
person ash
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok..I read your other story obscurity...which I thought was absolutly amazing...and now I'm reading this one cause I found it on your list...I hope that you update this one soon...I don't think you abandoned this work but it seems as if you have I do so that you update this one soon....and I will check in I'm falling in love with this story as well..you are great...

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person Darian
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story a lot so far, Draco is a mess and Hermione is on point. Update! Update!
person laura
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!?