rate_review Reviews

I've really enjoyed reading your story so far. I can't wait for more, please hurry. :)
I really like the plot, I wasn't sure I would, but I really do like it a lot.
Update soon, I'll be waiting.
Great job so far, keep it up.

@ ch 1, brilliant start, I can tell I'm going to love what's about to come! (uh, on the re-read I feel I should clarify that no pun was intended!) *blushes*

@ ch2 this story is so awesome! i love it! that broom riding scene was so sweet!

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!! I just started reading your story today and I was honestly going to review the chapters but I got so wrapped up in wanting to read the next chapter and the next I forgot all aout my plan to review in the first place. Then I came to the last chapter and was beyond sorely disappointed there wasn't more for me to read. so i thought I'd review and let you know how much I adore it. PLEASEEEEEEEE don't take long to update your next installment.

In it for the long haul.

Rain,

I am so glad you are back and writing. It was such a shock to log on today and see that you had updated "Jealousy." Just this past weekend I had stumbled across your other story "Obscurity" and was completely blown away by it.

I've only became a Draco/Hermione fan in the last few months. Since that time, I have read numerous fanfiction stories about these two, but I must say, hands down YOU are the best writer when it comes to capturing these two characters. I love how you continue to interject Draco's snark, even despite his feelings for Hermione.

"Obsurity" is by far the best story in showing how they are secretly falling for one another, yet still maintain their public personage. "Jealousy" is the greatest story in telling how Draco and Hermione can fall for one another, without planning it, despite being put together as a couple.

I must say, chapter eight of "Jealousy" is as wonderful as the first seven. I am so looking forward to reading more of your updates and wish you all the best as you continue to bring life and love to our favorite pair: Draco and Hermione.

Hippiechick192000

Oh my god, you've finally updated, I love how sensual this is and how hot and steamy this is! I'm so glad you haven't deserted this story. Please update, you are just wonderful at writing. :) Keep it up!

*reads new chapter eagerly and sighs happily*


I've missed this story. ^__^ Don't go away for so long again, por favor!<3

WOW! i LOVE this story. I love the passion in it. I can't wait for the next chapter!! ^_^

MAN!!! Did you abandon this story? It's such a good story (you must have done something right to win two awards, right?). Just as it was getting good, it just stopped. I know it's been a few years, but I can still have hope right? It sucks to be left hanging like this. I hope that you decide to pick it up one day. If you get this review and you've posted this story on a different website and it's farther along, do you think you can email the link to me? email: forlorn_hope365@yahoo.com . It always saddens me when stories are left unfinished.

Obscurity is wonderful and this one is equally good, but I agree it is lighter. Love the line "Dragons don't make good pets!" Lol go Harry, that's the perfect slogan for the Draco/Hermione ship.

Tell me you're planning on updating soon, if you don't I'll have to resort to making puppy eyes at you!

Pretty please with a chocolate covered Draco on top!

Aurora