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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person nemo
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Thanks sooo much for this update!!! I really hope that you will continue with this story and finish it eventually! Please, if you can find the time update soon again!
person tinogirl
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Am so glad that you updated! Really loving this story! I am hoping to see Harry get over this, be able to put it behind him and would very much like to see him happy, in a good relationship. I remember several chapters ago, he had some moments with Draco that were promising. I recall Draco saying that he had been in love with someone and lost him - couldn't help but think that he meant Harry. He seems to really care for Harry and I hope the story ends with Harry and Draco being together and happy. Please update soon!!!!!
person Rosei
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 35

Oh! Poor sick Snape!!
I mean I knew he was super disturbed but ...wow!
This story has hit a new stride in the "Severus under therapy"
section. Will Harry ever end up loving him, I wonder?
I feel really sorry for Snape, even though he had forced Harry,
and lied repeated too him and everybody else too!

Well, let the begging begin! MORE! MORE! MORE! HA!

Thanks,
R
person una
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
welcome back!!!!!!! i really like this chapter and the new direction of the story. it finally looks like snape has some hope. it's also good to finally see his true feelings
person Sabby
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gapes*

SHIT!! You need to update! And if you could e-mail me when you do that would be fantastic.

_very_ well written. There are a few chapters where you tenses don't match, but that's easily looked over. I have to admit that I didn't get what was happening with the story in the first half of it, but when that thing started spinning when Sev. was all "You have to" I knew it was really going to get good. I love that your chapters aren't short, or lack detail. I'm very impressed. You put a lot of effort and probably research into this story. Very realistic reactions from Harry, which I love. I can't count how many people put in unrealistic reactions to things, or how many progress into the story to quickly.

Love it, really really well done.

I hope you publish a book one day. Give me a shout if you do!

I look forward to the chapters to come.
person ckeeki
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have got to update this amazing story!

I like how tortured Snape is in wanting his Harry and I have a feeling somehow he's going to see him again.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Rosei
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34

I'm sorry. But you must drop whatever it is your doing.
(Unless your holding a baby.) And continue this story!! NOW!!!

For get your work, forget your life!!! I must read more!!!!
This story could really be so great if you would just reveal
Snape's psychological problems!! NOW!!!!

Sorry for the nagging but I've been really patient!!! (HA!)
This story haunts me!!! I think of at the strangest of times!!!
(What does this say about me?!! We're NOT talking about ME!!!
Stop talking about me!!!)

We're talking about YOU and YOU WRITING MORE!!!!
Yah!!!

Thanks for reading my rant!
Thanks for the great story!
R
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm stunned. I usually avoid non-con/rape stories like the plague but something about your writing kept pulling me in further and further. I'm glad that this story isn't abandoned because I really want to see how you redeem Snape enough to allow the story to move on. Short of a memory/mind modification I can't see how they can.

I also really want to know where Ginny has been all this time? Is she alive? Is she pregnant? Will the story change from M/M to M/W/M? Will Snape be able to share Harry if necessary? Will Harry ever be able to trust again?

So many questions! Waiting eagerly for the answers. Thanks for the storyline. :-)
person twinheart
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a rich, complex, intriguing story. I hope you will update soon!
person karekid2006
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when are you putting the next chapter up????