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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person vanessa
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is wonderful!!! there were moments when i felt like i was going to cry,
i feel soooo bad for harry. Oh please update soon, i need to know what happens
next!!
person tweenyrules
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooooooo good, there are alot of stories abotu forced bonding out there and it has always annoyed me that harry has just accepted it and didn\'t fight for control of his own life. keep up the good work and please update soon!
person acr
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, how is this marriage supposed to protect him and Snape?
person Amberstone
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Dear! GODDESS! I need more. RIGHT NOW!!!

I know this isn\'t going to be a happy story. I\'m not sure if it\'s going to end with even a little happy. However, I don\'t care. I was
just left hanging after your last chapter. I am in total aggreament with Harry. Its his life. He done eveything expected of him, so
why this?...why now? And SNAPE (*spits*) his reason\'s are his my ass. If it\'s anyone being selfish it\'s him. All the way. He can\'t
honestly expect Harry to just sit smile and agree with this and to not tell him why?

BTW why is Snape doing this? he\'d better has a damn good reason.

and I just know everything is going to go downhill from here, I just know it. I can\'t wait until your next chapter. It\'s soon right?!?
I usually dislike agnst stories and sad stories but I can\'t help but read them... all the time. And I would really like to know what Dumbledoor
thinks of all this ( I don\'t like the man much but he does play a pretty big role in everything ) and why he\'s sided with Snape in
it (and he did side with Snape, that I am fully convinced off. He or Snape didn\'t even try to sit Harry down and explain eveything
that is going on, or the reason\'s behind it, before springing this on him)

How do they expect Harry to accept these responsibilities and act like a man and then to not to extend the same curtosy to him
regarding this or anything. They treat him like a child who doesn\'t know any better. Part of life is about screwing up, sometimes
royally, but learning from it. Not just growing up and automatically *knowing* how eveythng is supposed to be. But no, somethings
going on so instead of going to Harry and saying \'we have a problem...\' or \'these are my reason\'t\' nope, not Dumbledoor or Snape!
Not those two. They just get together and go \'Here\'s how we can fix it, lets make Harry do it. Who cares how he feels about it, It\'ll be
better for everyone in the end. LA LA LA LA LA!! and Harry\'ll adjust and accept that he has no choice in anything for the rest of his
life (because that is what this is)

I\'m curious about the whole non-con, no comfort thing. Snape did appear to not want to cause Harry any ... well..... umm He did
say that Harry would get most every thing out of life, job, study, etc. You know everything, except freedom, choice & love. But I guess to Snape
those things aren\'t that important, even though he has the choice to them and probablly wouldn\'t give them up without a fight, Has he thought of
that huh?huh? but he didn\'t seem to *want* to *HURT* Harry but from the warnings it looks like he is going to, very much.

I hate SNAPE!!!

and I really, REALLY, hope that you don\'t have Harry fall for Snape, or if you do (which I still hope you don\'t) make Snape WORK for it
and it not to happen in just one chapter, multiple chapters would be good where the greesy fuc*er absolutly and totally SUFFERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
for it.

Oh and Dumbledoor to, I want to see him *break* when he see\'s what this did to his bloodly pawn of a golden boy!

But I really want to know what happens, you have me hooked and I need a fix as soon as you can. Would it be possible for you
to email me when you release a new chapter?
person auburn
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love It! Update soon, please.
person Lily White
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story...Starts almost like \"Where Others Fear To Tread\" which I totally loved, but is, at the same time, different. Can\'t wait to see what you do with it. Can\'t wait for your next update.
person Help Yourself
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!! Cookies?????
person Mdunlap
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s too bad Harry and Ginny didn\'t run away when they had a chance. This could get ugly. I\'ll be waiting.
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww bold boys, Now Harry, you and Sevvie get along and play nice. Lol, I love it so far. I\'m not a big fan of HP/GW, but Harry with Snape is my favorite. I cant wait to see what happens next, or why Sev wants to marry Harry in the first place?

Love it, cant wait for more! - Jess
person Petalsoft
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. I feel real sorry for him. It just doesn\'t seem fair that all his options were stripped away from him like that. If I were him, I\'d go ballistic! Keep writing.