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marvelous! you are truly a master of words...i like that you let harry stay mad at his friends, because, honestly, such disloyalty could never be forgotten or forgiven. i absolutely loved it, when harry broke his wand and his wedding vow was...classic. please update soon!

wow really good, pls update soon!
i have to admit, that id seen this story floating round for the past few months, but i had only read the start of the first chappie (didnt really give it a go) and tho it was well written, it just didnt appeal to me
This time i kept reading, and im SO glad i did
its really good, and i cant wait for harry to confront snape in private now theyre married, and i wanna see how snape reacts

one thing im confused about tho is harry breaking his wand.
what exactly happened there? what was the orange/red glow?
does that mean harry doesnt have a wand to do magic with and thus snape has even more control over him?
or have i confused myself, and it was someone elses wand...
so please elaborate on this

but thats a seriously kick ass story

I hope Snape dies because of the things he has done to Harry. I hope that he suffers and that Harry finds the strenght to break him. Did I mention I HATE Snape??

The whole situation is just nuts. It\'s seems uncannily unfair to Harry that he can do nothing about it. And can anyone blame his anger? Please update soon.

I love dark, angry Harry. Pretty harsh with Sev in the vows. Then again, he does hate being lied to. Too bad there wasn\'t a bouquet. I would\'ve liked to see who caught it.

I have to admit that I was greatly enjoying reading your story up until chapter seven. I loved that Harry was strong with his convictions and just didn\'t roll over and take it up the preverbial arse like he seems to do in most of the Snape demands Harry\'s hand in marriege fanfics that I read. I have read alot of them. True most of them start with Harry not wanting to Marry Severus however he just hangs his head curses his fate and Dumbledore. Then discovers after a few months, weeks, days, Hell sometimes it only takes a few hours of mind blowing sex to realize that he was wrong and he falls in love with Severus and they have children and live happily ever after. In your story however he was fighting to live his own life I thought that was awesome. Now I\'m just confused however. Minister fudge had threatened to strip Harry of his magic thus Harry surrendered his life over to Snape like I saddly knew he would. Though ot was great while he was fighting it.

Now this is what confuses me How the hell is the minister going to strip Harry of his Magic. He was made Voldemorte\'s equal when he tried to kill him when he was a baby. The whole wizarding world couldn\'t destroy voldemorte without Harry and yet Fudge is going to strip Harry of his magic take away his memories and send him packing back to the muggle world. Why didn\'t they do this to Tom Riddle it seems that bit would have saved them alot of trouble. Speaking of life debts doesn\'t the wizarding world owe harry one big time. However those are just my thoughts I hope they don\'t upset you because they are not meant to. Your story is great

Misty

Wow. NO choices what so ever.

Very well written. I was in tears as I read.

As Harry is slowly accepting that he has no control over his life, it will be interesting to watch his reactions to his so called friends. Perhaps Harry could get, I don\'t know how, something like a date rape drug, which he could take to make the marital rape that I feel you have planned just a little easier.

good so far though harry is a bit bitchy keep up the good work

Ooh wow holy crap. Harry dont! You cant kill fudge, I know he\'s a bloody prick .. but you just cant. Please say some one stopped him. ...

The chapter was lovely even though i know you despised writing it, lol . Will the sex between Harry and Sev always be non-con ... ? Or will Harry come around eventually, and realise his undying love for Severus? lol

Love it! ** Hands you tons of lemondrops and chocolate frogs in thanks ** - Jessica

this story is wonderful!!! there were moments when i felt like i was going to cry,
i feel soooo bad for harry. Oh please update soon, i need to know what happens
next!!