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Wow. That was intense. Poor Harry. I wonder what happens when he finally snaps?

wow!
harry wasn\'t the only one awash with emotions
i laughed at the seamus and harry thing, and i cried when harry did, and i felt practically every single emotion (exept maybe some such as jealousy... but u get what i mean)
this story has truly touched me... in all ways ;-)
i think it is such so eloquently written, unlike a lot of other fan fiction out there wihch reads like it has been written by a 12 yr old, and no doubt some of it has
although that is a bit hypocritical from a reviewer who writes poorly, (and whos pen name doesnt even make sense...)
but yes, please keep going
and ignore your real life, you dont need it if you can write like this!!
i really like your snape, the way he still has some of his old snarkiness about him, but the compassion he feels for harry is truly heart-melting

love it!
love YOU!
love from desperate contention :)

awesome, simply awesome. harry\'s reaction fits him to a t, and i actually cried on chapter eleven. The situation was just so hopeless, and even though it wasn\'t rape, it was still just so sad. I like that Severus isn\'t mean to Harry, but at the same time i wonder if this fic will turn into slash or not. I hope not, i felt so sorry for harry when he thought about Ginny, and I am dearly hoping they will find a way to eachothers arms again. But if Severus and Hary do fall in love, im sure ill be okay with it. this fic is just so well written, it would probably have me chanting SS/Hp 4evah!

anyway, i have already said this but i really like your harry. He was mean,he was desperate, he was trapped and heartbroken.I also liked the first part of their wedding night. There were no cliches, harry was still afraid and sad, he didn\'t isntantly become hard or suddenly be aroused, this makes your story so believable. Lease let harry still be uncomfortable through the rest of the night, because combined with Severus caring it truly makes this fic unique.

I absolutely loved the idea at the end!! My goodness this fic is soo interesting, you never seis to amaze me!!
Please don\'t make us wait to long for the next chapter. :D

Not being able to take a piss by yourself seems unnecessarily harsh. When it feels like the whole world is against you, a few minutes staring at yourself in the mirror in the bathroom is every person\'s right. Alone.

This is such an awesome story. I love forced marriage/bonding stories especially when they involve SS/HP. you\'ve actually made harry a fighter and he doesn\'t just bend over and beg like most stories. He\'s always to easily persuaded and forgiving. Here he\'s protesting and an utter bastard. THANK YOU!!! You\'ve made my day and I\'m eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

Did I mention I want Snape and Dumbledore DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good chapter. Very intense. I\'m confused about the gown thing...

Oh my god... This last part of last chapter was a little bit too much for me. I can very well understand why is Harry so angry. His wov is written brilliantly! (Your writting is really EXCELLENT!! - atmosphere, feelings, talking!) But the scene on the toilett - I cannot imagine, why should their gown be so weird. Yes, may be they are not able to open the gown without his partner\'s help - but why they can\'t piss without help?
I think Dumbledore found really \"promising\" way how to make a new Dark Lord from Harry, right after Voldemort\'s death.

why did you have to stop there?
WHYYYY??!!

that was an interesting and unexpected... event... with the toilet... *ahem* yes
i don\'t know how on earth you came up with it!
i like the idea that they can\'t hurt each other, but i guess that makes sense cos otherwise harry would kill potter... (snape)... in an instant

yeah, good story, please continue!
but faster, cos ive been dying for this chapter!
i dont care if it means the chapters are crap, or shorter, just PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

:D