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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person Carol
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the storyline and I hope that Harry comes around. it is nice to see a different side of Snape. Please update soon!
person JJ
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was intense.

More, please!!!!
person desperate contention
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Snape. He loved Harry, and now that has all gone to ruin.
I cried at the end (again)! you\'re story makes me more emotional than the Harry Potter series!!!
i feel so sorry for Harry, having to be raped, (well in a way).
i have no idea where your story is going, so the next chapter will sur[rise me no matter what happens
but please keep going, because i love it!

:)
person Roedhunt
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to thank everyone for your wonderful reviews!!! I\'m just sorry I can\'t respond to each of them..*pouts* (I can at my live journal tho) Some of your questions I can\'t answer because it will give the plot away. Sorry. I will say that things are not always what they seem and you have to read between the lines or better yet, read what\'s *not* there. *grins*

Annie
person lemonade
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Feel the rage, baby!! ;D I just found this, and it has quite the emotional impact going for it. I have the most sympathy for Harry, and I think his vows were brilliant!!! (Hey, I empathize with very stubborn people, what can I say.) Snape\'s expectations were quite.... unrealistic. Ron and Hermione.... well, I like that they\'ve had to pay. Testifying against him was the ultimate betrayal. They should have noticed that no one was on Harry\'s side and supported him. Albus in canon manipulates (not to the fanon extent, but still... fanon gets it from SOMEWHERE) and he is in rare form in this fic. Snape treating Harry like a mushroom (keep \'em in the dark and feed them bullshit) seems right on target for his character and is giving you lots of directions that you can go in this, so it\'s difficult to really guess what\'s next.

Well done angst. Please update soon.
person CanadiangirllovesHP
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. I look forward to the next up-dtae.
person KatelynXM
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was so sad!
Poor poor harry, i really hope he will have his revenge, or that ron and hermioine will save him, or something! He\'s just a teenager, and everyones forcing him to do all these horrible things! The injustice of it all! And Snape, that bastard better realise what an ass/petifile he is and kill himself! And dumbledore and fudge should die too!AHHHHHHHHHH!

damn, this is an awesome story, you have gotten me so riled up. The paret in the last chapter were harry remembered ginny brought tears to my eyes, and im really glad the sex remained non-con, because it would have ruined the sad feeling you get from reading this story. Who will save our beloved hero? I have this story on my reccomended reading list, and will be checking regularly for the next chapter.
person Phorcys
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, A story where when Harry discovers he has an arranged patner he doesn\'t swoon with desire adn immediatley fall in love. This for the relative temr of realistic is more realitic. I love Harry\'s reaction. It was so nasty, and emotive it felt real, and not fake like a lot of stories please keep writting.
person acr
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Very intense. Poor Harry.
person thistlerose
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I keep wondering if this is going to be what finally breaks Harry completely. After all, having absolutely no control over any part of what is supposed to be a personal decision (who to marry and/or have sex with) and, in essence, being forced to accept your own rape, has got to be one of, if not THE, worst thing in the world. Stengthen Harry - somehow I don\'t think so.

Keep up the good work! This is masterfully written and I look forward to all future chapters.