rate_review Reviews

Snape was such a contradiction in this chapter--I can see why it took so much out of you. He thinks to himself that he wants Harry\'s forgiveness, but then seems completely unaware he is digging a bigger hole in Harry\'s already ghost-like soul when he takes away his husbands volition and has sex with him anyway. You never write easy stories and I imagine there will only more more horror for Harry with some hope for the future? I do not recall that Draco Malfoy has made an appearance yet and the mention of him at the end intrigued me. I thought Harry\'s friends were to support him and felt they had no other choice, but why are they looking to Snape for guidance if they should follow Harry from the Great Hall? As difficult as this story is to read, I still want to know what happens next.

I wonder when Snape will figure out exactly what he\'s gotten himself into. He doesn\'t seem to have much of a clue at all. As a matter of fact, what he seems to want (physically, emotionally) most from Harry will be denied to him forever. In all of this, Hermione, Ron and.... I reluctantly suspect Draco... seem to be on Harry\'s side. Maybe Voldemort will kill Snape and free Harry. ;) Why on earth did Ron and Hermione defer to Snape when they went after Harry? That seems odd to me, maybe I don\'t get it. Is Harry a slave in this scenario, or a spouse? He still didn\'t eat, and I don\'t blame him. He\'s going to get pretty skinny if he keeps this up, but Snape deserves to see what he has and is still doing to Harry, and he needs to find some loathing for himself as well. Unless he\'s just completely nuts, and then he might never figure it out. I don\'t need to tell you that I\'d love to see some retribution happen.

Wow. I can\'t believe Snape did that. Poor Harry.

Wow. Good chapter, very intense. In a way, I feel sorry for Snape.

They\'re both hurting!!!
Will it ever get better?
Will Snape ever tell Harry about whatever happened to him?
Will you update again soon?

Thank you for a story that doesn\'t have Harry falling head over heels for Severus the minute they are forced into a marriage. I can\'t tell you how much I\'m enjoying this story -- even if it does bring me to tears with each chapter. I can\'t believe the way the Wizarding world is treating Harry and expect him to stil be their saviour. I hope he gives them a massive surprise. They are more likely to get a Dark Lord that makes Old Voldy look like Shirley Temple. I look forward to more chapters.

okay part 2 of review, sorry my computer went all weird on me.

I really love Harry in this chapter, he\'s broken, but not lost. He still challenges Severus, and makes some very good points, my favorite line being the one in the aforementioned review above. I hope harry doesn\'t go suicidal, he can\'t die just b/c of everyone else\'s ignorance and evil! All this time he has faught for everything he beleives in, for everyone he loves, he now really needs to learn how to fight and try to live for himself.

p.s- I wonder what happened to Ginny. Why did they have to take her away from hogwarts just for having sex with harry? Was it b/c she put up a fight? If she did, will she ever see harry again? Whether or not harry falls for severus their reunion must be seen, due to the fact that so much was left unanswered between them.

p.s.s-IIIIII LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE TTTHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSTTTTTTOOOORRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYY SSSOOOOOOOOO MMMMMUUUUUCCCCCHHHHHHHHH! and dang, you update pretty fast.

I think that Dumbledore was an insensitive jerk, expecting Harry to feel like going out in public after what amounted to rape. Can you get Harry to hex him for me?? At least Severus actually seems to care nominally. Well, at least enough to give him space to try to cope. How sad for Harry. Hope he finds SOMEONE he can talk to in order to help him cope, maybe the Weasleys.

update this soon! This is a good story. I really must say that it is definitly an original.