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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person Eliza
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I think this story ROCKS! The dynamic between Harry and Snape is interesting, and you can feel bad for both characters. Anways, I hope you can continue on :)
person sweettee
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finnished reading chapter\'s 14- 15 and I can\'t wait for the next up date which I hope is real soon
I\'am emailing all my friends to tell them about this fic again and that it is update to chapter 15.
person JJ
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really glad you\'re updating so frequently. This is not a complaint, but I\'m lost. Or maybe I have just too many questions. Rather than ask and appear stupid, I\'ll just have to wait for your next thrilling update. Yea!
person desperate contention
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now I\'M the one screaming!!
AAAHHH
u evil person!!
so many questions... whats going on?
what does malfoy know, or what has he done????
i cant wait for the next chapter, and it had better be up soon, or im going to hunt u down and... make u write it!

but i love it, one of the best fan fics ive ever read
oh the suspense!!
person anonymous
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story. It is one of my ultime favourites. Poor Harry, i hope soon that things start looking better for him, but i love the way that he\'s still not giving in to snape to quickly. Please update soon
person KatelynXM
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm *looks over at her Snape plushie, who is alienated from the rest in a corner, and wonders whether or not she can trust him*.

Will Hermione and Ron EVER pull their heads out of their asses? What do they think could have happened to Harry, I mean , 1-he said \'dont touch me!\', 2 -it was their eh-hem wedding night! And now Draco has got me seriousy worried. Please dont let Draco rape Harry please, as if Snape hadn\'t been traumatizing enough. And as much as the whole incident about the lotion thing counts as a point twoards Severus to me, Im still pissed that during his last rape session with Harry he said \'my needs\". What about Harry? Does anyone even care? I do *hugs Harry plushie*. If I was Harry, and I wanted retribution I would be trying my best to make sev\'s life a living hell. Also, i wonder if that dream Harry had will be explained soon too.


p.s- Ive made up my mind (not that it really matters, cuz you da awesome author, not me), I kinda dont want this to be slash with Harry and Snape. Even if it wasn\'t m/m, i could never see anyone falling in love with someone if what happened in this story happened to them. Also, instead of mpreg, I think they would more likely adopt. I\'m sure their are a lot of orphans out there(voldies doing of course) and Snape would probably adopt hoping to appeal to Harry because Harry is an orphan. Plus, since the chances of Harry buggering Snape are slim to none, and that forcing Harry to become pregnant would be horrible of snape, Im kinda seeing that as the only option. As far as \'accidentaly\' getting Harry pregnant, I think a lot of magic on Severus\'s part would have to be done to make a man pregnant- so regular sex wouldn\'t lead to any pregnancies. Unless Harry turns out to be some kind of half-breed. (But in the end, whatever you decide will be the best, I surely have no doubts.)


p.s.s-I love this stroy, and I loved this chapter! I am totally addicted, and you update so fast. You are truly an amazing writer, and I would love to read any other stories you might post - speaking of which, when your done with this story, i would love if you could check out my challenge \'escape\', especially since i love your Harry character soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! ^_~



(always waiting for the next update)-XM
person acr
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. What\'s up with Malfoy? Does he have a crush on Harry? Or Severus? I can\'t wait for more.
person lemonade
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooo HOOOO!! I\'ve been waiting for Harry to give him at least a teeny taste of hell for everything he\'d done. I get the suspicion that the vows they made during the wedding are magically binding. I bet Harry won\'t ever respond, no matter WHAT Severus brews, and Snape will be mightily disturbed to find out that Harry won\'t be getting any friendlier toward him until the marriage ends (and he can be manipulated with potions or imperius) or one of them dies. It would serve Severus right to not know about the vows after all he kept from Harry. I love Draco in this, even though Harry really hates him, he\'s the only one who seems to have things figured out and is at least approaching Harry hinting at the truth. Hermione doesn\'t seem to know, otherwise I\'d say she\'s the one he could count on. Now maybe Harry would think about teaming up with Malfoy in order to do something about his situation. I\'ll bet that slippery slytherins can manipulate the situation better than honest griffindors, so my money is on Draco, slime that he is. I\'m so glad you updated, that last chapter was hard on the heart, I needed to see Harry stick up for himself at least. Keeping me on edge, playing with emotions, that\'s what is making me check for this when I get on here. Well done.

Oh, and did Harry insinuate that Draco and Severus were an item before the marriage?? Now that IS interesting. Will Ginny be able to help Harry? Maybe the memory of his night with Ginny would serve to piss Severus off. I\'d LOVE for that to get rubbed in his face. Well, I\'ll quit begging for retribution out loud, here. It\'s your story... and good the way it is...don\'t think I\'m not appreciating it when I voice my vengeance wishes. ;D
person Lasski
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m beginning to tear my hair out... what is Draco playing at?? So very pleased that you updated so fast but my head is spinning more than ever. You\'ll have to update fast this time before my head explodes. Excellent!
person sak
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are evil because I do have more questions. Draco Malfoy is definitely not some inocuous bystander in this is he? As if the pot needs more stirring!