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Yeah, another chapter! I feel I haven\'t left a \'stupid\' review in quite some time, so here goes. Prepare for randomness:


*In Debate Class*
Brendoner*drops a speech* Oh Eric!
Eric: Nya, What?
Brendoner: I dropped my Aff case, could you pick it up for me?
Eric-Nya, Ok.
*As he leans over to pick up the case, Brendoner stares lustfully at his behind*
Eric:Here you go, nya. Now I have to go get circumsized. Bye, nya. *Eric Leaves*
Brendoner: I will cherish it forever.

*Like, 10 seconds later.*
*Brendoner dropps his Aff case.*
Brendoner: Oh David!
*David comes over*
Brendoner:As you can see, I dropped mt Aff case, silly me. Could you pick it up for me?
*David picks up Brendoner, and eats his head.*
Brendoner:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Thats it for The Adventures of Brendoner In :Nice Aff! Case, that is.
(This makes fun of my friends, they are not really like that, but they do beg to be made fun of.)
God have mercy on my soul.



Sorry bout that, great chapter-XM

i thought harry couldnt get lil harry to work because of the wedding vows.
You said something about contracts, i think maybe on your live journal site, so that might also play a part.

yeah in the vows he said
\"Because of this contract, you are allowed to take your pleasure by using me as a vessel, but as long as we are married, there is nothing you will be able to do or say to me that will arouse me, entice me, please me or satisfy me, for those desires within me no longer exist\"
but maybe that isnt binding...

or maybe you asked why he fainted...
but you (well snape) told us about that earlier

ok, i just confused myself :P

very good chapter, it seemed a little bit short, but maybe thats just my impatience
cant wait for the next one

:D

Ow, it\'s painful. I hope they will find some way out of the situation, to break the bond or fulfil it... But I\'m not much optimistic considering the title of your story... It\'s good, very good.

Whoa! How did I miss chapter 16? Did you give us TWO?? (((hugs)))

THANK YOU!!

Another great update! I am so mad at Dumbledore and Snape, what aren\'t they telling Harry? What is the bond that they both have to be willing to complete. It is just the marrige contract that is causing them to get sick or is there something else! Great story, can\'t wait to see what happens next

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NONONONONONONONON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Evil cliffie!
There is so much hurt and pain in this story, if I didn\'t hope for a happy ending, eventually, I\'d give it up.
What is going on here? I understand that Harry is loosing his magic--deliberately. But what is the point of the story?
Is it only \"let\'s see how much we can make Harry suffer?\"
I hope eventually SOMEWHERE THERE IS GOING TO BE A REDEAMING PURPOSE FOR ALL THIS PAIN.
Until then,
I respectfully say...
Please update soon!
I check this one every chance I get on line!

Well, I\'m glad Harry finally told Albus off. Good chapter.

Uh oh!!!!!
Poor Harry!!!!!!

Meanie! You have enough angst to tie the Gordian Knot (look it up!) and then a major cliffhanger! Wow. I need to go get my heart checked. I don\'t think it can take this kinda stress. :b

Wow. Have no idea what that was all about. Albus and Severus indicated it was the bond failing. If the two of them were supposed to be \'willing\', why did no one listen to Harry? I don\'t think that he could have been more clear on the fact that he was anything BUT willing to be involved. I believe he even prepared for death as his option of preference, doesn\'t get any clearer than that. And ALBUS?? What is he thinking? What Harry said to him was very true. Every single time Severus was with Harry, he was forced. Harry wanted none of it, and I can\'t think of a time that he didn\'t beg it to not happen. Does that mean that Severus could be prosecuted? That\'s what the contract said. Harry was forced into the bond, wasn\'t willing from the get go, so does that mean that everyone involved could be prosecuted? Or does a \'life-debt\' absolve the guilt of rape? I can\'t imagine a place where that would be true, but... hey.. it\'s your world.

Actually, there could be a few reasons.
1. Voldemort is meddling in Harry\'s physiology, making him not respond and therefore break the bond and lose two adversaries
2. Malfoy is meddling, either on his own or on Voldy\'s behalf
3. Harry\'s vow is causing the pain by interfering with the bond
4. Harry\'s soul is dying and trying to take it\'s bonded soul with it (If I\'m going down, I\'m taking you with me!! Mwahahaha!! ;D )
5. Ginny\'s relationship with Harry was more than we thought it was, maybe she had a bond with him that interferes with Snapes
6. This is a dream/vision of Harry\'s and much of it isn\'t real-- maybe Voldy\'s doing, to try to make him die? give up? kill his soul? I dunno.

The only reason I even put 6 in there is that some of the reactions are so random, especially to Harry\'s point of view, and the whole pushy \"tell me what you are dreaming and I will fix it\" sinister thing. That screams that something is really wrong. Oh, and why is the staff trying to get him to call them by name? Especially after they forced him to marry Snape? They have to know how pissed off he must be. It\'s kinda creepy. Very Stepford Wives. ~shiver~

I hope you update soon... I\'m dying to know what\'s going on!