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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person KatelynXM
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sneaky sneaky draco...i do love some drama.. voldie and draco and nightmares oh my !

can\'t wait for the next chapter. I think dracos due for a right ass-kicking yes.
person Lady Gray
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you updated. Poor Harry! What exactly is Draco up to? Is he trying to help or hurt, hmmm. thanks for writing.
person deb
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i\'m glad u updated likes, its been ages or feels like it anyway! lol your story is bound to be the best snape and harry bond fics ive ever read, i just hope they get to know one another better and harry begins just making the best of it, the situation after all thats what slytherins do and he is more slytherin than Gryffindor
person JJ
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on solveing THAT problem. Now we can get on to the good stuff. Oh, yeh---this is not a happy story. Well, I can always hope that it will work out. Thanks for the update.
person Ajax
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good, please give me more!
I thought Harry was pregnant, but he is just, \"full\" , right?...
person ice owl
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This may sound mean, but just once I would like to see Harry die and everyone else can see what kind of shit their \'meddling\' caused. In real life there are a few unhappy endings and you have the perfect setting here for one. I think it would give the story the perfect \'umph\' since that is what you have been working toward the whole time and the consistancy of it would have people screaming!
person avihenda
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! it can\'t end there! write more! and soon!!!! Grrr.

please?
person desperate contention
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it; a bit of severus showing his compassionate side!

a lot of people are asking questions and hypothesising, but right now with this story, ive liked everything u;ve done so far, that im happy just to sit back and go with the flow
whatever happens, i know its going to happen well, because u are a CHAMPION WRITER!!
*throws streamers at roedhunt*
sorry that u didnt feel well, but know that u have a crowd of supporters behind u netime u \'feel small\'

good chappie btw *thumbs up*

:D
person NightShade
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull, original... Poor Snape - I understand everybody pities Harry (I too) and Snape \"has what he deserves\", but he really didn\'t mean it so horribly. He was \"only\" stupid and selfish, but the price they both pay is too high...

A solution would be to kill Snape and then cure Harry :-) But I don\'t doubt you have much better solution... I love this story.
person deb
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol !! hehe lol hehe! ah lol hehe im going to laugh me self to death great update and update soon!