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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person audmar
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it need more totallly cool different story, plot is one of the best
person sirigal
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story please finish
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I just have to know where this is all going to lead to!
person NightShade
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was interesting. Draco in fact HELPED him - he said him hard but true things... I hope you will not abandon or forgot this story, it\'s really interesting and good.
person desperate contention
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
actually, i just had a thought about draco
he;s not in love with harry is he?
i mean he fought against the marriage, and he sorta stalked harry before, and now he\'s saved his life
i mean, that was a wierd thought, it just sorta hit me!
but i guess its not very probable though

oh also... i dont want a dead harry, or a dark harry :(
if anything, a broken harry

:D
person Ox King
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap!!!!
person desperate contention
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NONONONONONONO!! DONT STOP TO DO UR OTHER STORIES!!
pleeaaase! just keep doing this one, or ill cry

this was a good chapter, i really liked it!
\"Harry wanted this to stop and stop now because he secretly knew what this meant. Defeat.\"
Thats so sad, but very good!

I really want to read the nest chapter, because i\'m interested to see which direction you take it. I wonder if Harry and Snape will react differently to each other now...

You said something that confused me, but i think that might have been ur point (sneaky)
it was snapes idea to marry harry right? not for some other scheme or something...
hmmm *ponders*

:D
person avihenda
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that must be one of the weirdest chapters I\'ve ever read.... great plot twist idea about the not being able to cum. but still a weird picture in my head.

hope to read more soon.
person acr
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor harry. though I had hoped he would do a little negotiating here. Is he EVER gonna get some revenge? BTW, where is Remus in all of this?
person FluffNutter
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I\'ll confess I felt the story was losing steam and focus for a little while there, but DAMN that was a good chapter. Can\'t wait for the next one!