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I started to hate your Snape. I want him killed and given as food to dogs. Hermione is silly. But I\'m not sure what to think about Draco. This story is wonderful!

Roedhunt,

I certainly didn\'t want my comment to come across as a criticism of your writing. That\'s not what is was meant to be about.

I suppose I was/am angry at the plot you\'ve created because, up until the last two chapters, the characters were close enough to canon for me to feel that you were doing a good job in creating an AU story with a good plot using the existing characters.

In the last two chapters though, it\'s like you diverged \"too far\" and, also, the story is really a depressing one (as far as what you are portraying). The later makes me angry for the lead characters, but the former means that I can no longer picture them as the Harry Potter (etc.) that we are using - know what I mean.

Anyhow, I will probably still log on to see what happens (a bit addictive the story), but I am put off by the OoC nature of the characters now.

Kind regards

Mark

AHHHHH! Kill Snape!!! Pleasuring Harry-my ass.

Yeah, Snape wants to keep everyone away from Harry I see -So he can brainwash him, maybe?
Something your *required* to do in a *forced* marriage, kinda comes out to same thing, huh?

I liked how we got to see a lot of Ron and hermione in this chapter, and of course, Draco\'s appearence is always welcome. Maybe he\'s not in love with Harry, but he does want the marriage to end so that Harry is weak enough for the Dark Lord to kill, thus avenging his father...hmm, just a random thought.

OOOh, that was such an evil cliff-hanger, poor Harry! Please tell me someone interrupts, and Harry can find and excuse to leave. Draco, Hermione, Ron, anybody!!! But, please don\'t make it so that when Harry , umm, pleasures Snape, Harry gets turned on too-or something like that.
I can\'t believe Snape is trying to make Harry feel guilty... Hmm, raped, defeated,used, confused, humiliated,heartbroken, depressed and guilty... Yeah, Harry is probably gonna kill himself if his knight in shining armor doesn\'t come wisk him away soon....

I love this story, can\'t wait for the next update!!!
-XM

Oh mi gosh. What the hell is WRONG with these people!!? Snape can\'t be that dense can he? Oh I\'m so pissed. I don\'t know how Harry\'s going to deal with what comes next. From here on I can see Harry either spiraling into complete shutdown or slowly winding into explosive homicidal rage. I\'m so excited. I can\'t decide which to root for! The anger and hate would keep him alive at least until he destroys Voldie but wouldn\'t it just serve them bitches right if Harry stopped caring altogether and they were suddenly left without the BWL to save them. HA!

The whole situation is exquisite. I can\'t wait to see what happens.

Ooooo..... he\'s an EVIL bastard! More more!!!

Poor Harry. This is a great story so far.

Alright, now I think you really have taken Harry too far into the abyss. He\'s not going to take that, and the stupidity of his friends is now so OoC that it borders on pathetic.

I really liked your story up until the last two chapters. It was interesting, it presented a well thought out problem/scenario. But now, too many OoC\'s are kicking in. The guy married to Severus is not Harry Potter. The girl hanging around with Ron is not Hermione Granger.

I\'m afraid that, whilst I think you write well, that the OoC of the characters has caused me to lose interest in the story. It was easy enough to overlook the life-debt issues (like what about Arthur Weasley, Ginny Weasley, etc.) and the like. It was easy to overlook the Dumbledore stupidity. But when you start making the main characters OoC to the point of irritation, well - let\'s just say that I don\'t enjoy the plot/story any more.

I\'m not actually being critical of your writing - it is excellent. Merely the plot itself.

Thanks for creating an interesting universe - but....

GRR! I hate SNape! PLEASE let harry stand up for himself. Honestly, I\'m ready for a little relief from the angst.

First of all, I want to thank each and everyone of you for taking the time to review! It means so much to me and I wish I could respond to all of you to say hi and thank you for reading!

Second of all, to wyadr. I\'m sorry you didn\'t like the last two chapters. This is only a fictional piece and not canon. As for the plot, well it\'s not called \"The Death of a Soul\" for nothing.

For everyone else, don\'t despair. Sh*t will soon hit the fan. Trust me. *winks*

Thanks again for everyone\'s support!

Annie

Ohhh, I am liking Severus less and less as this goes on, AND i am begining to wonder if Malfoy is goint to end up being an ally. Jeez everyone is so freaking oblivious to Harry\'s pain. GRRR...