rate_review Reviews

oh please update lol looking forward to the next chapter

Not a bad story, certainly better than most around here. Just two things. Firstly, concerning Snape\'s character, you\'re written him pretty well, most of the time, but in some places it\'s not very consistant. I understand that you want to keep his motives in the dark for a while, but his character seems to be changing quite a lot. I remember one chapter where he was relieveing memories of being raped and trying to persuade himself that he was not like that - and in this chapter, I think everyone can agree, he was quite evil. It just doesn\'t seem in line.

But still, you\'ve written Ron, Hermione, and Harry pretty well, and the plotline\'s great so far. I\'m curious about the ending - if it does end up a happy snape/harry, I think we can trust you to do it realistically. :)

Keep going!

snape is so horrid. makes my skin crawl.

excuse me but oh shit. Man I was right sad just doesn\'t cover the scope of this fic. I really hope you have something terribly nasty planned for Snape and Dumbledore. Great update.

Wow! Roedhunt, this is a great story. Every time I read it my stomach gets this big pain in it for Harry. Nobody cares how Harry feels as long as they get what they want. I feel really frustrated that people are so cruel and oblivious to everything that Harry\'s going through and because nobody\'s listening to what he wants. Poor Harry. I can\'t wait for the next chapter to find out what happens and how Draco is involved in everything. I\'m also in the midst of reading your other stories, here and at the Wonderful World of MakeBelieve and I\'m really enjoying them also. Keep up the excellent work. I can\'t wait to read more. Thanks for your hard work.

That bastard! next chapter please. I hope Harry bites it off.

\"

what the hell Malfoy knows somthing, snape wants it and harry doesnt wonder how it will all turn out? well hate to say this but i hope he stays with snape! please update soon your chapter was small

I am a true Hermione/Draco shipper, but I must tell you, it even pains me to admit it, your story is my favorite one on this whole site. I think I must be feeding off Harry\'s despair, nothing ever turns out right for him. He is thwarted at every turn. What is Draco up to? He clearly knows something, but his trustworthiness to Harry is laughable. I really like your With A Dragon\'s Heart and The Kinkiness of Harry, too. Every time one of them gets updated, I almost want to do the little dance that we used to do on the trading floor the day that bonuses were announced every year, AKA, the money dance. And we\'re not even paying you.

Your story is painful and wonderful. I was inspired to write a poem based on it. I am posting it here for you to look at. I might post it here if you have no objection (it is based on your idea after all) hope you like it.
Death of a Soul. Birth of a Blade

Once I lived.
Once I laughed and I cried
Once I bleed
Once I loved. No more

Now I am a thing.
Now I am burned and frozen.
Now I am beaten.
Now I am shaped and honed.

A soul no more
nor yet a man
I am become..
The Sword of Light.

I live no more.
Not yet to die
I am to kill
then to be no more.

I hope you update soon... how long do you envisison your story being.