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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person butterbutt
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! And you promised that the shit will hit the fan. Where\'s my shit, damnit!!?? Heehee. Loving it.
person Lady Gray
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohhh, something deep going on with Malfoy, does he have feelings for Harry?? It seems like it... And SNAPE GRRRRR!!!, he is lying to harry, thats what the ball with the arrow is right? harry CAN say no, surely \'all the responsibilities and duties of a husband\' is a relative concept that doesn\'t mean snape has all the power. I hope harry gets it togethere soon and begins to fight back, maybe with malfoys help? AND if the new vows overide the condtions from the original marrige contract does that mean the restrictions that force harry to stay living with Snape are lifted too? I hope you update soon.
person sak
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deeper and deeper the tears in Harry\'s soul go. How long can this go on? And like Harry, I do not understand Snape\'s behavior.
person War-chan
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m SO confused!!! Is Severus REALLY the bad guy or is he being controlled? And what\'s with Malfoy? (Now the question I\'m begging you to really answer!) Is there going to be an happy ending to this!? Please let me know!!! O~h! And o\'corse PLEASE UPDATE!!! ^_^

~Miss War-chan ^_~
person deb
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapters seem smaller please update soon
person JJ
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Snape is lying and Harry is too beaten down to do anything about it.
I hope he fu*** Snape and Dumbledore over really good.
If you had to live with that, I\'m glad I\' still single. Now if my kids would just go to college, I might enjoy it.
person cat
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story, and think you\'re doing a great job with it, as always. I must admit though, I\'m getting a little antsy with the progression of things. Yes, there are clues that there is more to the story- Snape is clearly lying to/deceiving Harry in some way, and Draco seems to hold some sort of key to the whole scenario, but we\'ve known that for ages. I don\'t know how much more of it I can handle. It occurs to me that this may be precisely your point, given the title. If so, trust me, you\'re there. We are all dying for Harry- everytime I read this I feel like my soul is about to die for him! (I mean that as a compliment- not a criticism)

It\'s just wonderful and I admire your ability to spin such unique and emotionally-involved, complex storylines. I\'m just dying for some answers, and I really want you to send give Harry some sort of reprieve/inner strength soon because I don\'t know if I can handle any more of this angst!

I hope that this came out as a compliment, because it truly is. I don\'t think I\'ve EVER read a story that I was so emotionally involved with. Bravo!
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on update UPDATE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on update UPDATE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
person Tado 666
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I cant wait to read the next chapter and see whats going to happen!!