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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to hear that u are not married to that man anymore, as he doen\'t desever to be married to such a talented writer. Or anyone for that matter. I really love this story and I like all of ur readers would appreciate a quick update.
person Katelynxm
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, Draco to the rescue! Snape was , i mean he was, wow...as he in a drunken rage or something? Somehow managing to show his true colors while lying all the same...hmmm, this story just keeps getting better..or sadder..whitchever one..loved harry punching snape in the sternum.

HARRY/DRACO 4EVAH!
person cath
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm.. somehow I think that Snape\'s evil behavior has something to do with Voldemort... and Draco will help Harry to find something to fight for again...
person Ramos
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every time you come out with another chapter I tell myself I won\'t read it, because it just makes me pissed off. I don\'t like your Harry - he\'s given up. Right now my fantasies include Harry being unable to produce a Patronus when a dementor attacks Snape. Then, Harry can keep his beloved Kissed husband in a closet for the rest of his very long life, all the while shagging Ginny Weasley and being disgustingly happy.
person Cootie
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A word used in the chapter and ends in -ive. . . Hmm. . .

Bastard-ive?

Silly Roedhunt! That\'s not even a real word!! Who do you think you\'re fooling?

Ne, I can\'t figure out what\'s going on. In earlier chapters I thought Snape might care for Harry a little (even if he was insane and misguided about it) but now he\'s just being completely evil! He swore to Albus that he wasn\'t a rapist, that the idea was abhorent to him but now he doesn\'t seem to care if Harry\'s willing or not. So what happened? Who\'s evil and who\'s not and who is in league with who and what is Harry going to do??
person Reader
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, but how awful...Snape really thinks he can do whatever he wants. There must be a way for Harry to change something, to fight back, to change the wow once more! How can Snape be so cruel? Is he really in love with Harry or just using him? What Draco really wants? You left me confused again.
person Rachel
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kill Snape
person lilycat
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You\'ve done a very realistic job of writing the dynamics of such an unhealthy and detrimental relationship. I actually started tearing up quite a bit throughout this chapter. After reading your author\'s note, i can only say that I\'m very glad that you aren\'t married to such a man anymore. It really is quite upsetting.

I do hope that some kind of protection/vindication is coming for Harry somewhere along the way, no matter how unconventional. Right now I feel like my heart is breaking for him. It\'s wonderfully written. I am also really enjoying Draco\'s character. He\'s marvelous.

I am a bit worried about you now, however. I also hope that you got your own resolution. No one should have to go through that.
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated :D:D:D!!!!! I hope u update soon, I would really like to know what is going on with Snape. Did someone bewitch him or something? Or is he just a bastard. I really hope u do a Snape POV so that we can all know what is going on. Anyways hoping for a quick update!
person Butterbutt
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah!! What\'s going on?? Why is Snape being such a bastard? Are they intentionally trying to break him?? And I can\'t decide if Draco is in on it or trying to goad Harry into fighting back. Now I\'m mad. I want Harry to get pissed and fight back against everyone and everything. Burn the place to the ground!!!