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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person Lady Gray
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! Harry is up to something? and what is this about a bond, how is that different than a marrige. what is malfoy up to? thanks for updating so quickly...
person Katelynxm
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! I guessed it! Behold my fan-fiction figuring insignificant things out skill!

Ooooh, I loved Hermione and Ron in this chapter, although Hermione was a little mean to Ron, I admired that she finally ahd the courage to confront Harry, although she might have wanted to talk to Harry before she told anything to Ron. BTW, loved the cliffy..made me go ooooooooooooooooooooooh...


I loved Snape and Malfoy\'s pissing contest too. I was cheering for malfoy-I mean Draco the whole time! Althoguh Snape\'s little smirk at the end worried me. I absolutely hate (not you or your story, I\'m solely refering to Snape) how Snape keeps trying to make Harry feel, well, guilty. It\'s horrible! ooooh, I wish just once Harry would try to run, or yell or hit (well, hit again^^;)!

Can\'t wait fo rthe next chapter, your beta is awesome!!!

-XM
person paige
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m actually wondering what\'s with Harry and Draco. Harry\'s depressed. He\'s not fighting enough. Why\'s Draco helping Harry? Is he a good guy? or at least on the side of Light? Is he in love with either Snape or Harry?
person Storm
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay another update. I\'m so happy, I love this story and can\'t wait to see what else happens. And yes I loved the pissing contest as well.
person mab
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue.

Am enjoying the story, though I am surprised Harry hasn\'t thrown himself off the top of the astronomy tower yet.
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
K, that just left me with more questions but at least those questions have direction now. I love this fic and am happy that u decided to update so quickly :D!!!
person Kris
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intense! Snape is abusive. That isn\'t regular and moderate relations, that\'s rape. Harry may have agreed to fulfill all the requirements of a spouse but as defined by who? Besides isn\'t Snape violating the marriage contract? \"...Forbids either spouse to be emotionally, mentally, or physically abusive.\" and \"Forced...to have sexual relationship is entrenchment on a right of a spouse for personal freedom and can have consequences in accordance with law.\" Please keep writing.
person acr
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens. Poor Harry. Great story.
person anonymous
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! First off i think at this point i want harry with draco, please do something. Snape is all evil again. *Tears out hair* and what is up with that spinning ball. Great chapter and please update soon, hopefully :) begging.
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe u were married to someone like the Snape in this story. That most have been really hard on u. I am really enamered by this fic and I am desperate for an update. So please please update.