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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person Katelynxm
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this chapter deserved two reviews form me, so here goes:


Hmm, maybe Snape started out with good intentions, but the ability to have a sex slave tempted him to go over to the dark side. (Just like Dumbledore feared giving him the DADA job would.) Yeah, death of a soul...the death of Snape\'s soul to Darkness? Maybe just the death of Harry\'s old soul, cuz\' now he\'s a new person, but he can still be happy with draco???

Can\'t wait to see Harry\'s training, wil he train with Snape, or just have extra lessons with his other teachers. (I\'m kinda missing Hagrid here, can only imagine his response to all this..anger...greif..confusion...bashfulness...shouldn\'tve said tha\'.^^)

I\'m kinda hoping that in the end, Harry gets to Have Ginny and Draco, b/c he deserves both of them, and after all his pain, he shouldn\'t be forced to choose!!!

Wait, what if Harry runs away to see Ginny(see, and talk, not have relations with - so he doesn\'t go against the marriage.)
He could leave behind money and food and \"sexual stimulation\" for Severus so that he could still provide for Severus, and then leave a note saying where he went (very vagualy that is) and proof that he is safe and will return home.(doesn\'t say when!) That way he wouldn\'t be being a bad husband!!!


That would be awesome...either way, this story is still awesome..I really hope something sparks some definance in Harry soon..last time it was Draco..Maybe Snape says something about Draco(Or Ginny) that infuiates Harry so much that he fights back...

Can\'t wait fo the next chapter(as always)!
-XM
person deb
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well thats a weird story i have to admit i mean why is harry still fighting agaist it so much? lol of course he is! why is Snape doing it? anyway ! bad boy! i hope Snape sucsseds likes lol i dont know why but i do
person Kristine
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just don\'t have Harry totally give in. i\'m sure he can make sure Snivilus enjoys himself and pretend to enjoy what\'s being done to him without totally giving in and being the dutiful husband. so many stories like this i\'ve read where Harry totally caves and loves his forced mate. just once i\'d like to see one where Harry gets a bit of his own back and makes the other guy just as miserable as he is.
person desperate contention
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEXT CHAPTER! NOW!
person Butterbutt
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know WHAT\'s happening but I\'m mad as hell and Harry\'s not gonna take it anymore!! Hee hee!
Yay! Another chapter!!
person JJ
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hooked.
Is Snape evil?
Is he doing this to destroy Harry?
And Draco mentioning that something is fishy REALLY has me going.
You evil person you.
Please write more!!!
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please save that boy, I love Severus to death=) but what he\'s doing in this fic is wrong and Dumbledore should be killed for what he\'s done.
I wouldn\'t forgive any of them for forcing Harry into this.
person FluffNutter
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo...another chapter and so soon. Yay! This story keeps twisting and turning and I\'m hooked on the rollercoaster high. Keep on!
person sak
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, definitely more information in here (as well as more intimidation by Snape). Being the blockhead I am, it does not make any sense to me, but I can tell the pieces are there. If I can stomach it (because this tortured Harry is difficult to read), I may reread the earlier bits to see what I might see.
person anonymous
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this ending should be illegal! how could you end it like that. and maybe i\'m slow, but what is still up with malfoy? Does he like harry himself, please let them end up together. Right now i\'m pulling out my hair, i need more, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great chapter, and yes more informative, but at the same time, still puzzling.