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well he's finally getting some of his own back! YES! I really can't wait to see what happens next. But I do have to say I'm still a bit confused by Snape's and Fudges motives. Will there be more information on them again (granted I could have missed it the first tims--so I'll be checking that chapter out again). Thanks!

This story is driving me bats! I don't know if it is the constantly shifting characterizations or what.

GAAAAAAAH!!!

Okay, first of all: Yay, update!! Great chapter.

Second of all: GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! AAAAAAGH!! Snape is driving me mad!? What the hell is wrong with him?? (I think I ask that every chapter). He's spent the last three or four chapters being an utter hateful unfeeling bastard. And now he's like "*whimper* *whine* Dur, I just want you to be happy, Harry. Dur." Is he only saying that cuz Harry is complying? He sure as hell didn't give a #$%# how Harry felt when he wasn't getting his way. And what's this with "I want you to spend more time with your friends" when a couple chapters ago he told Ron and Hermione to piss of. AAAGH! Stupid Snape!!!

Hey there! It's just lil ol me. I just thought I'd stop by and say thank you and to let you know that if any of you had any questions regarding the plot, characters or whatever, please come to my Live Journal under the same name and we can chat. I know a lot of you have questions about Snape. I lived with a man who is very similiar to him. Very mentally abusive and was only happy when *he* was happy. Now that he has everything, he suddenly thinks of others. I hope that helped a little. *smiles*

Take care and Happy Holidays!

Annie

finally an update!!! Great Chapter, at least snape is doing better in the end, seems like he may have a heart after all, but with your story who knows, lol:)

I wont be surprised if Harry becomes the next Dark Lord. But first, he would have to kill off the competition. I can just see the recruiting platform. "Imagine a world were there are no more Purebloods left to discriminate. A world were Muggleborns, Halfbloods, Vampires. Werewolfs, and Goblins are treated equal, because they are equal". Ouch, I'm harsh. Well its the truth. Purebloods thought up this idea and forced this idea onto Harry. I feel in a way that they superseded the prophecy. This is not the power that the Dark Lord knows not... is it? More soon please. I need to see Harry kick some ass and take some names.

I really like the premise of this story but I have been quite confused by the latest chapters. It seems like there is very little continuity between updates. I'm sure that the mystery is what you're going for, but it just seems a bit spastic. One chapter Snape's abusive, the next he's the concerned but misguided caretaker. And Harry's character is even stranger. I get where you're going, I think, but it seems like rather than the plot having an arch, it zigzags all over the place and the forward motion is waning, so it really does feel slow in addition.

You are a wonderful writer and I will definitely still be reading and being very grateful that you put out such beautiful stories. It's just that the story felt so mysterious in the beginning, and I loved the way I felt like we got a bit more of the puzzle each chapter. Now I feel like (with the last few chapters) maybe their isn't an elaborate mystery unraveling as much as people just acting bizarrely and without explanation. I'm SURE that there is one, I'd just really like to get some indication of what it is sooner rather than later.

Your writing style is superb and always a delight to read. I'll look forward to more no matter what.

OMG! Thank You! I appreciate you working on this chapter in the morning, it was superb! Alot of info in this one, it keeps getting better and better. I seriously can not wait for the next chapter!

Please update soon!

Is it just me, or am I not alone in hoping something REALLY horrible happens to Snape? (Preferably involving \"flesh-eating
parasites\" concentrated in his groinal area?

I love yer story BTW...