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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, we see Harry turning a corner, but I am at a complete loss as to whether he should bother saving anyone. Remus was upset - big deal. Remus is a grown man - he could have approached Harry at any time. Hermione and Ron have it all figured out - big deal, too little too late.
I suppose Ginny is somewhere - waiting. Either she has been captured, is dead or is being held in reserve by Severus or Dumbledore or Ministry in case Harry starts acting up.
I'd say, you write well - but the story is too depressing and has too many people too blind to the truth that it is hard to see a positive.
My compliments to your penmanship.
Mark (Wyadra Writings)
I suppose Ginny is somewhere - waiting. Either she has been captured, is dead or is being held in reserve by Severus or Dumbledore or Ministry in case Harry starts acting up.
I'd say, you write well - but the story is too depressing and has too many people too blind to the truth that it is hard to see a positive.
My compliments to your penmanship.
Mark (Wyadra Writings)
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and I love it still, but I dont understand them anymore and it is confusing. I realy need some explanations, some of their thoughts, to understand them a little bit...
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:)
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HMM Good for Harry, he's finally playing Snape. Can't wait to read what happens next.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, nother chapter!
but Xm is confused, so so confused...(oooooh, Snape said he could GO! but go where?)
but Xm is confused, so so confused...(oooooh, Snape said he could GO! but go where?)
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
veeerrrrrry interesting.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I READ YOUR FIC TODAY AND IT IS VERY DISTURBING AND CAPTIVATING. i COULDNT STOP READING IT. i WOULD APPRECIATE IT IF YOU EMAILED ME WHEN YOU POST!
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UUUUUuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhh "?"
What just happened? Harry seems to have turned on everyone? Or is he using his slithirin side to start messing with Snape? Is he finally going to start paying everyone back for what they did to him? How evil are you? What do you have planned for us? ABOUT TIME!!! I swear, I was so tired of Harry being abused with no weapons to fight back with. You said this was not going to be a Harry falls in love with Snape story, which I happen to love by the way, but you are such a good writer that I decided to stick with you and see what you could do: so let the fireworks begin!
What just happened? Harry seems to have turned on everyone? Or is he using his slithirin side to start messing with Snape? Is he finally going to start paying everyone back for what they did to him? How evil are you? What do you have planned for us? ABOUT TIME!!! I swear, I was so tired of Harry being abused with no weapons to fight back with. You said this was not going to be a Harry falls in love with Snape story, which I happen to love by the way, but you are such a good writer that I decided to stick with you and see what you could do: so let the fireworks begin!
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I tend to read others reviews after writing my own and I came across your note. Thanks by the way. I noticed that Snape was being nicer and seemed more caring now but didn't understand why. I thought maybe he did love Harry after all. But your inside info made straightened that out. Because as long as things are going his way, he appears wonderful, but when things don't go his way he becomes manipulative again, right? I KNEW it was too good to be true. He doesn't really care about Harry -- he just wants to keep everything going his way. And if something bothers Harry then his world implodes: that's why he wants Harry happy. It's the ultimate proof that he was right in everything he did.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don't get it in the last chapter harry wass all up in arms about hate ans such and snape was bastard like ow harry is a drone snape is the caring husband and i am confused as all hell as to what is going on, pls pls clarify for me is it an act by harry of or ... i don;t know what but it is confusing the hell out of me when you switch moods in your writing so suddenly.