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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person Jay
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please udate soon... I must say I like your story and want to read the rest please^^
person Redlightspin
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good drama. two things where is she and why did he
person Echo
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor tortured Harry. Earlier in the story I was actually feeling a little sorry for Snape trying so hard to get Harry to accept him, but he turned out to be lying b*@#$%d.
So what happened to Ginny? Is Draco going to make his move now that Snape is out of the way? Please update soon.
person Alison
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please update soon! =o)
person sunsparked
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good! but sad. i love it. but did snape die?
person Jessica
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I can't wait to see how it ends!! You are a genius!! A mastermind of brilliance!!! I actually cried for four or five straight chapters!!! I felt so bad for Harry. Will he and Malfoy get together, or will he reunite with Ginny? I hope he gets with Malfoy, but honestly, I don't like het but you made me enjoy Harry and Ginny for the first two chapters! Please update soon!!!
person Roedhunt
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To StaplersBreak:
It\'s a pity you didn\'t review on my LJ because then I could ask you specific questions regarding your comments. You did make me think on numerous things that you said. You had several excellent points and I am working with others to correct them, so I thank you for that. That said, however, you had also made some very rude (and yes honest) comments. I really could\'ve done without hearing that you rather watch a gruesome carwreck vs reading one of my chapters. Honestly, if you didn\'t care for the fic, why comment at all? Unless... you A.) enjoy flaming someone or B.) can\'t review *without* restraining your nasty opinions that could\'ve been done a LOT more tactfully. Almost sounds like you\'re a Snarry fan. As for the point to this story, *snicker* it FANFICTION! But it IS good to know that I had provoked *some* kind of emotion from you. Enough to comment! That made my day. *grins big*
person emi
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderfull. I have been waiting a long time to see this come to a head, and so wonderfully you\'ve done so. Thank you for weaving such an intriuging tale.
person StaplersBreak
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am frustrated. I hate your story. I despise it. But I cannot keep myself from reading it.
I must still be trying to find the point to it. No luck so far.

Some parts are realistic. I know that I would be acting much the same way if I were in Harry\'s shoes. Other parts are utterly preposterous. So much that the scenes are convoluted to fit a certain contrived path that only you really understand. None of the characters intentions or motivations are addressed very well, if at all. The best job is done on Harry himself, but that fizzles out in later chapters. Maybe they all went nuts, hmm?

It\'s just one of those stories where no one really knows what the f*** is going on but the author(ess). At least, I hope you do. At some points, I have to wonder. I think that I\'d get more entertainment watching a particularly gruesome car wreck. I feel like I just witnessed one after reading a few of your chapters.
person madrigaelle
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello? Anyone here? It's been a while since the last update. Please tell me you have not given up on this story! This is my favorite so far. Keep it up you're the best!