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for The Death of a Soul

by Roedhunt

person lizkrohn
schedule February 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Will Snape dissovle the bond? He is too selfish to do anything like that:

1 self-preservation - they might send him to Azkhaban after the bind is broken

2 he likes owning Harry

3 He actually likes haveing harry at is mercy, the son of his childhood nemesis

Harry shouldn't be is any relationship, with ginny, Draco or another until he has sorted out his feelings about himself and live on his own without being controlled. firstly he was controlled by the Dursleys, then Dumbledore, then the order, Ron and Hermione maybe his friends but they also were a tool to control where he went, what he did, who he was friends with etc. Ginny was also "the pureblood, light, acceptable girlfriend"! Whenever did he actually make is own choices and decisions? Not mentally healthy at all!

person Beyrus
schedule December 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hi!!

I'm Beyrus, a slash writer and I love your fic, that's why I'm writing to you. **Sorry but I didn't found any best way to contact you**. 

I'm a Spanish girl and I know a lot of people that will enjoy with this fanfic, but as they don't speak English, they can't. That's why I would like you to give me your permission.

I upload my fanfics at www.slasheaven.com and I was wondering if you would let me translate into Spanish your fic "Death of a soul" and upload it there too. 

Slasheaven is a popular website where a lot of spanish-speaking people share their fanfics. You can check my fanfics there, my nickname is Beyrus.

BTW, are you going to write the Epilogue? It'd be a very good thing *^_^*

Thanks for your attention and hope to hear from you soon.

My e-mail is marea_1982@hotmail.com

Bye, bye,
Beyrus.

person jami_lee
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! I just found this I love it!!! But if I was Harry I wouldn't be able to choose.
person Cat
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Where the HELL is the epilogue! I want to know what he decided!
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. There is only one major problem. YOu left us hanging what the hell happend next. Pleas. Finish. The. Story!!!! Please?
person leanne
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
okay the thing I like about this story is how you portrayed a fairly good emotional break down and the insanity of both the unstableness of Snape and how unstable Harry had become in it. I had hoped this story wouldn't have been quite so dark. I had hoped that Severus and Harry would have had a good and caring relationship in the story at some point. What I don't understand is why this story was placed in the Severus/Harry as in a relationship section. I think it should have been placed in the General section and placed in "dark" story. This story was addicting and horrifying all at once.

Severus is already a tragic person due to his own abusive father in own pain over loosing Lily Evans, and if in your story he had been trained in "love" making he had been raped terribly while learning this art for Voldimort.

So all in all this story is Tragic and painful. You did a good job in demestrating the damage of rape on the sphycie.
person IshtarTenshi
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You're back! *hugglez* I'm so happy you put out a new chapter. Hurry, I want a new one! I have cookies...*swings cookies in your face*
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh it s been so long I love this story I read it all again please when you get the chance update when you can I so want to see what happens thank you!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There is a part two where !
person Monique
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story! Amazing writing! Soo want them to all be together in a litle love triangle lol. Just wondering if part 2 is out (because i couldnt find it) or if it hasnt been startedx yet?