rate_review Reviews

Awesome one-shot! Keep up the fantastic work!!!

o.0 my my, someone has been reading too much smut. at least in your riviting tale, i was able to overlook the blatant lack of plot. as i am sure was your intention. in the future, it would be most prudent if you would incorporate a bit of substance to your articles, as you will find that those in the transitional stage- or those who have romantic ideals of a relationship with severus, would be put out with your lack of tact.


overall- i found it delirously dirty. i suppose that i may just never be able to wash the filth from my body. i commend you.

Good bet and good ideas, but you were just a little short of pulling it off. I liked it, just a few revisions could make it even better.
Don\'t let me discourage you, you have talent!
Good job writing!

Good luck with future fics!

Out of Character, entirely too rushed, and it had more ridiculous euphemisms for the word penis than most torrid romance novels. It\'s even worse than some of those penthouse letters....

OH, this is a really great fic, especially for your first one. Congratulations!!!

I loved the ending snipes at each other; What if this was a set up by Severus or Draco? What if it was a set up by Harry????????? The Draco/Harry feud has not been established here, so anything goes. And Severus wasn\'t too ashamed at the end of it all either, so he could have been in on the set up.

Very well written and nicely portrayed. A good piece of smut.

I\'ll look for more of your work.

Good story. I think the whole plot could have been better developed but overall it was an interesting read. It was a bit awkward to follow because the background details were too sketchy.