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person Aka
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, you really shouldn't pair Draco and Lucius with the OC. Even now I think she's a bit (alright, a lot) Mary Sue-ish...
person momoko
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Shardae
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So what done Harry find out??? And what happens to Dumbeldore??? Add soon...
person steven van overbeke
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this Fan Fic. I think it\'s cool. I like Ariel
person Sea
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An interesting idea for a story. Looking forward to more.
person Storm
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you have the beginnings of something good....now if you just explain....why Lucius of all people was drawn so strongly to her......I\'m curious....

anyway hope to read more soon...

Love,
Storm
person Robbie Byrd
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you added the surprise of how there was an Heir of Hogwarts.
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah...Aeril? The daughter of the four houses...

sounds dangerous.
and sexy.
and cool.
and wonder.
and cool.
and interesting.
and cool... (did I say that already?)

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