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This is a great fic. Update soon.

Helo, there!
I\'ve been addicted to AdultFanFiction.Net for a while (I\'ve already sucked FanFiction.Net dry... T_T), but this is my first review EVER in this site!!!!
I\'d like to say I love your story, but have a few suggestions if you\'d care to read them!
Perhaps, to solve the chapter legth problem, it would be a good idea to go into a little more detail... Not too much, but actualy \"show\" Voldemort changing things instead of just saying he did afterwards...
Even if it was a newspaper article, it would not only expose Voldemort\'s actions more deeply, but also the public\'s reaction to all these changes...
Do they know Voldemort is behind it already or not? If so, how was their reaction to this new side of him they\'d never seen? If not, how do they feel about the ministry\'s sudden change in politics? And so on...
I don\'t know if I\'m being clear... Sometimes I explain too much and people get confused... T_T
Anyway, I\'m only saying all that because you mentioned wanting longer chapters and I believe this would be a nice way of doing it (another would be having more stuff happen in each chapter, thus having more material to work with)! I really like the story so far, though (I can\'t wait to see Voldemort and Harry meet eachother)!! Congratulations!
Kisse,
Mari-chan (aka Kizuki-sama =^.^=)
P.S.: Could you e-mail me with the updates?

~You\'ve got a good plot. Story needs to be a bit more mature. Take it up a couple of levels reading wise (I don\'t mean start tossing out sex all over the place I mean take it up to at least 12th grade reading level) Please don\'t take this the wrong way. You\'ve got some good stuff here and I lool forward to you updating.
Email: starsong39@msn.com
~The Flame Reviews~

Have Lucius Malfoy adopt her and marry her off to Vincent Crabbe-arranged marriage, and she starts hen-peckin over homework now (etc, etc, etc)

I\'ve enjoyed your story so far and I\'m pactiantly waiting for more. :)

I love this story please update.

This fic is GOOD.
I really like your fic!
I want know the updates PLEASE.
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this is a very good story... only a few things...
1: are you writing this story twice? there are 2 stories with the same title on your \'homepage\'.

the only thing that i can really complain about is that the chapters aren\'t very long, but i guess that you will fix that once you get into the story a bit more.

i have to go now.
take care, and i look forward to another chapter from you.

Esther

Please add me to your list. anubiset@sbcglobal.net. Thank you.

I was too lazy to sign on. But I like this story though. I want to read more of it. ^_^