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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an adorable story! i really like the whole idea of leaving the bar together,and then at last in the end entering it together as well. keep up the good work!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a beautifull story. It wasn\'t just fun, it touched some heart string in me. It\'s lovely.
And well written, with a god rythm.
Tanks for the experience. Keep writing.
And well written, with a god rythm.
Tanks for the experience. Keep writing.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. u are such a brilliant writer. i just wanna keep reading and reading but i love it when it ends cos it ends so well. i am totally in love with u now.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You said a lot in a small time. That in itself is an artform. And thanks for not threatening me for a review and if you did I didnt notice it but I got to tell you its a lot like going to a restaurant and leaving a tip its nice but shouldnt be necessary.
Sometimes someone catchs my noticement and I just have to stop in and say hi and give my honest compliments and isnt that the best one when it hasnt been pressured out of a person? Outta here
Sometimes someone catchs my noticement and I just have to stop in and say hi and give my honest compliments and isnt that the best one when it hasnt been pressured out of a person? Outta here
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Odd that...I\'m not an advocate of either drinking or cruising bars. And, yet, this is a beatifully touching little tale of just how love can find you regardless of where y ou are hiding.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smile* So they were destined to be together. Apparently their bodies knew it before their hearts and minds. Will you continue this? Will there be a part 2 or is this a one shot?
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*expires on the floor laughing her ass off* that was just so... sweet! awesome! loved it!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... nice work!!!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww that was great! it was hot and sweet at the same time! i love the ending about the making love part. i loved it, i had wanted to read it earlier when i saw it and now im glad that i have this was awesome!