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omfr>> Hee-chan>< update>< write more!! Me begging you!!

Good so far now, like the other people said you will keep updating or else. -Shifty eyes- I\'ll make you pay Potter.

I think I have read this story three times while waiting for you to
update it very good .

So wait. Did I read it wrong? Adair has green eyes and black hair too?

Keep up the good work!

Great story! I really like it a lot. It has some interesting features in it that make it different. Your imagination is awesome.

The story has lots of action in it and although the rape scene was brutal, it was well described.

I hope you don\'t take this the wrong way, but you should get a Beta to review some grammar and spelling issues. Either that or use spell-check on your word processing software.

You\'ve made Draco the bad guy here and it\'s intriguing to see how he handles \'Potter\' in this story.

Severus is quickly falling for Harry, being tender and caring. Sort of gives me that WAFF.

Please continue writing and posting more of this story, it\'s really good.

Interesting story. Keep it up.

If you can\'t find a beta, you should at least run it through a spell check. Even the most basic of word programs has them. If it weren\'t for the misspellings (of main characters too!) and glaring grammar errors this would be a good fic.

Wow, I LOVE this. Its a wonderful story, you should get a beta though. There are many words spelled wrong.

Love it, please continue soon! - Jessica

Oh, please update soon! I am loving this story!