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for Twisted Games

by MortalFate

schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please update soon :D
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, now he's got to deal with Draco as well... Loved the chap!
person anon
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story has a good premise but you really need to get a beta. Or at least start spell-checking your work.
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow have you stopped writing this I want to see where you go with this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please...
person Kat
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing and ideas but i think harry would be more...emotionally scarred than that. he has just been raped after all...still i think you could make a great story out of this, ill read on...
person Demon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I look foreward to the next chapter ^^
person B-chan
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I\'m looking foward to reading more. (hard core H/C snarry fan here!) HOWEVER, a word of advice, B E T A ...find one, or at least use a spell-checker. Also, Jeeves is Peeves (just think \"to peeve/peeved\" \"to annoy/annoyed\") Also great sorce of info, www.hp-lexicon.org.
hope this helps. Happy writing, now I go back to reading. ;-)
Becca-chan
person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC
YOU GOTTA UPDATE ASP
GO TO GO THANKS
person tomarlia
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god you must finish this story. unbeliveable.
person Nightwing
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ironically i actually feel really sorry for draco.... *gives draco a hug*
I can\'t wait to read more, and see how the plot thickens!
Chow for now!