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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s so cool!! I never read a fic that Harry is the veela.. is always the other way around.. Please update soon, ok? Hugs!!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I finished it! I really like it. I would complain about puncuation problems and such, like everyone else is doing, but I didn\'t notice any. Do post again soon.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can you double space this? When the lines are so close to gether it makes the story imposible for me to enjoy. I read about half this chapter, and I liked it, but I couldn\'t keep going.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I beat LPhoenix!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please wriet more to it i wanna know what happens
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww.. poor harry!!!! update soon!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your story it has some very creative little touches...but also a lot of gramiticle errors making it harder to read...please get a beta...then your story will be great!!!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
liked the chapter. good start. ready for the next one.