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by ANNA

person Fefs
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry is so cute wanting Draco desperatly like that! And you\'re right! We love some angst.. but please update soon!! Hugs!
person sbkar
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitions of too on the Web:

* excessively: to an excessive degree; \"too big\"
* besides: in addition; \"he has a Mercedes, too\"
www.cogsci.princeton.edu/cgi-bin/webwn2.1

You don\'t use it...Instead you are misusing \"to.\"


The following definitions are from www.dictionary.com
to
prep.

1. a. In a direction toward so as to reach: went to the city.
b. Towards: turned to me.
2. a. Reaching as far as: The ocean water was clear all the way to the bottom.
b. To the extent or degree of: loved him to distraction.
c. With the resultant condition of: nursed her back to health.
3. Toward a given state: helping minority women to economic equality.
4. In contact with; against: their faces pressed to the windows.
5. In front of: stood face to face.
6. Used to indicate appropriation or possession: looked for the top to the jar.
7. Concerning; regarding: waiting for an answer to my letter.
8. In a particular relationship with: The brook runs parallel to the road.
9. As an accompaniment or a complement of: danced to the tune.
10. Composing; constituting: two cups to a pint.
11. In accord with: job responsibilities suited to her abilities.
12. As compared with: a book superior to his others.
13.
1. Before: The time is ten to five.
2. Up till; until: worked from nine to five.
14.
1. For the purpose of: went out to lunch.
2. In honor of: a toast to the queen.
15.
1. Used before a verb to indicate the infinitive: I\'d like to go.
2. Used alone when the infinitive is understood: Go if you want to.
16.
1. Used to indicate the relationship of a verb with its complement: refer to a dictionary; refer me to a dictionary.
2. Used with a reflexive pronoun to indicate exclusivity or separateness: had the plane to ourselves.


adv.

1. In one direction; toward a person or thing: owls with feathers wrong end to.
2. Into a shut or closed position: pushed the door to.
3. Into a state of consciousness: The patient came to.
4. Into a state of action or attentiveness: sat down for lunch and fell to.
5. Nautical. Into the wind.


[Middle English, from Old English t. See de- in Indo-European Roots.]

too Audio pronunciation of \"too\" ( P ) Pronunciation Key (t)
adv.

1. In addition; also: He\'s coming along too.
2. More than enough; excessively: She worries too much.
3. To a regrettable degree: My error was all too apparent.
4. Very; extremely; immensely: He\'s only too willing to be of service.
5. Informal. Indeed; so: You will too do it!


[Middle English to, from Old English t, to, furthermore. See de- in Indo-European Roots.]

Usage Note: Some language critics have objected to the use of not too as an equivalent
of not very, as in She was not too pleased with the results. In many contexts this
construction is entirely idiomatic and should pass without notice: It wasn\'t too long ago
that deregulation was being hailed as the savior of the savings and loan industry. It was
not too bright of them to build in an area where rock slides occur. In these cases not too
adds a note of ironic understatement.
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 9!
person Aisling
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
let me guess... pansy and seamus? LOL more soon great fiction :D cya later xxx
person SeverinKSnape
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
got to be Ron and Seamus, but I supose it could be crabe and goyle too...hmmm a conundrum... write more soon,

~Sev
person Storm
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story is going. Although I wish that Harry and Remus got along a bit better but oh well. I like how your handling it. And are the two people Seamus and....Ron? Oh my god, obsessed Ron! jKeep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo, is it Ron and Seamus?
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Can\'t wait for chapter 7!
person Alexa
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fun chapter!
The two people - Seamus and Ron. Didn\'t know Ron so so kinky. Nice. When do I get the cookie?
person Missi
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So...Ron\'s the new Dark Lord, Seamus is the new Wormtail, and...why are they grindin in a room full of people?