rate_review Reviews

that was beautiful. sad, but beautiful. i wish i could write that passionately--without seeming to. i don\'t know what to call it except beautiful

wow. yay!

you should continue this, make them start to like each other. it\'s such a good story, i just want to read more.

Well-written - good job! They should just use a fertility potion or spell so that she can get pregnant, then they won\'t need to have sex again until after the baby is born and they need to produce the next kid.

i really liked it!!!!
i think u should turn this into a longer fic. It\'s got lots of potienal.
To tell u the truth, i don\'t think there are enough marriage law stories out there (well good ones i mean :P).

If u decide to do it. I have an idea, if you\'d like.
They could keep trying to make a baby, but haven\'t got there yet.
Then the law is over turned. By that time, they have fallen in love.
But some where in the malfoy marriage code, if they don\'t get pregnant soon, the marriage is over.
So they try everything to get pregnant. The ending is up to u.
It was just a though :)

God that\'s sad.

Yes, that WAS v. angsty! A bit confusing, but in that good sort of way. I kept hoping there\'d be some bit of happiness in it, but the way you wrote it was carefully done and meaningful. Good job, I enjoyed reading this.