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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While the story is decent in premise, there are some rather blaring mistakes.
1) James Potter was the head boy, not Remus Lupin.
2) Lucius Malfoy was in his 7th year when the Mauraders were in their 1st year.
3) Remus never helped James and Sirius torment Snape. He did not like that they were tormenting him.
4) Hermione never would have laughed about Snape being tormented. She would have been unhappy about it. After all,
she is the one who always tells Harry and Ron to show some respect.
5) Where did Neville get the ingrediants for his Potion? And how did he know it was going to be the potion required to
pass the exams? Students do not know what potion will be on the finals. Also, there is not time potion in canon, so
you really need to do a bit of explaining in the story.
As I said, the premise is good. Hermione's and Remus' relationship is well written. I like that fact that he is trying to deny his feelings when Hermione makes it back to her proper time. But, would Dumbledore really have condoned a relationship between them? Regardless of the mistakes, I hope you are planning to continue.
Refer to this website in the future. It is the best Harry Potter site on the web. It has even been endorsed as completely accurate by JKR. http://www.hp-lexicon.org/
1) James Potter was the head boy, not Remus Lupin.
2) Lucius Malfoy was in his 7th year when the Mauraders were in their 1st year.
3) Remus never helped James and Sirius torment Snape. He did not like that they were tormenting him.
4) Hermione never would have laughed about Snape being tormented. She would have been unhappy about it. After all,
she is the one who always tells Harry and Ron to show some respect.
5) Where did Neville get the ingrediants for his Potion? And how did he know it was going to be the potion required to
pass the exams? Students do not know what potion will be on the finals. Also, there is not time potion in canon, so
you really need to do a bit of explaining in the story.
As I said, the premise is good. Hermione's and Remus' relationship is well written. I like that fact that he is trying to deny his feelings when Hermione makes it back to her proper time. But, would Dumbledore really have condoned a relationship between them? Regardless of the mistakes, I hope you are planning to continue.
Refer to this website in the future. It is the best Harry Potter site on the web. It has even been endorsed as completely accurate by JKR. http://www.hp-lexicon.org/
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but i can\'t help but wonder if there is more to it. Will you be adding any more chapters to this?
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!! I really love your story! It\'s definetly my favourite Hermione/Remus-Fic. I wished Hermione could have been in the past forever, everything seemed so right. Hey but now they\'re together in the present, how about a future? Keep on writing please!! Please update soon, I want to know what happens to them.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im glad you are back. I was wondering when you would update.. And trust me it was worth the wait.. I would give this story so far up to this date a 10 but our scale doesn\'t go up that high so you get 5 complete stars from me.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well now, that was interesting. I hope you update this shortly.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chappie!!! They save Hermione!!!! WWWWWEEEEEEEE!!!!! (Does happy dance) I really enjoyed this chapter and I can wait for the rest!! I hope that school is going well for you and I look forward to your next update!!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! This is one of my fave Remus fan fics. Let me know when you update! just go into my bio and get my email address.. Pwease?
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah... now they have kiss and all they have to do is \"make up\" ~giggles ~ i love it i hope you update soon and in till then love peace and fan fics and later for now
angel
ps ohhhhhhhhh and keep up the awesome work and later for now
angel
ps ohhhhhhhhh and keep up the awesome work and later for now
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue with the story. I\'m hooked and can\'t wait to see how things will end! I\'ve been checking a couple times a week for an update. I hope you haven\'t abandoned the project.