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for Bath Time Ritual

by cherrycolachick

person Lady X
schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Highly interesting topic, but not a very good read. You could really go in-depth with the idea and take it somewhere. A harem of girls, slaves, 'donating' blood, perhaps?
person Blackat
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! Runs away from fanfic
person ~f~
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
actually this is not sick and it has happened with a real person. Elizabeth Bathory bathed herself in blood to keep herself looking young. She also reminds me of the way you wrote about Lucius.
person ~f~
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By the way, i like the way you described Lucius. He really is gorgeous and young looking for his age.
person HermioneNDraco
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... It was good. sick and twisted but very good.
person Narcissa Black
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit disturbing? (Imagine Ron Weasley yelling here) Okay, interesting though, and well written. Perhaps not stranger than injesting your face with poison, or introducing silicone into your body where it can leak out and destroy your immune system.
person misslala
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn\'t say it\'s sick neccesarily, but it definatly something one can picture Lucius doing. But its well written. Please write more.
person Brittany
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that was...intresting
person amber
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is truly twisted and weird but well written. I could see him doing this to preserve his beauty as well as his wife\'s.
person john the heavy
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sick. Disturbing. I Love It!!! I could really see Lucius doing this as his vanity is portrayed nicely in this fic. Good Job!!!