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person CHIBI
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update
person LaraCroftFan8000
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. The words fit perfectly, and the emotion is expressed beautifully. Nice work!
person Ed
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wholey Shit! I had no clue you came on here till this morning. *runs around and pokes you then laughs hysterically* This story rocks. >D *is sorta shocked you would write something like that*

*pokes you again* Have a good weekend, and you still have to give me the link to your site. x3

~ \'Special\' Ed
person LPhoenix
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet another fine chapter my friend! update agian soon!
person Katsu
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whaps you* write more... *Grins* it\'s kinda evil to want Draco to open up to Harry what with the whole mortal-enemy thing but...strangely satisfying ne? Please write more...
person Krazy
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm....awesome. I never thought of there being a broom shed for some odd reason. *ponders* That adds a whole new dimension of things.

And I totally think that Harry purposefully locked the door with a charm when he came in, and unlocked it on the way out. Sexy. ^-^

*~* Krazy *~*
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
request for longer chapters

Other than that I like it so far!
person Kitty N
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even if it was short it was still a really good chappi and i don\'t mind shortr chapters cause most of mine are but like i said in my other review update as soon as possible before i go insane k? Well ttyl
Your #1 Fan,
Kitty N
person smurf
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Please keep it going (and longer chapters than this last one couldn\'t hurt lol). It\'s cute that Draco and to fuck Harry
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate the suspence! Really I do! But I can\'t wait for chapter 4!