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Ooh, there are so few bastard Harry out there. Its usually Snape that ends up on the bad side of the bed.

And pregnancy...I usually don\'t like those kind of fics, because they are all sweet and lovely, but this is a nice dark twist that I can really appreciate.

If you do any more could you please notify me by e-mail? I\'d really like to see where this is headed.

And the plot thickens.... I thought Severus woke up in the last chapter. Did he pass back out by his door?

i read 1-3 that severus is pregnant (harry\'s or someone else) if it is harry\'s is he going to be in the children life? or go to azkaban for what he did to severus or it ? i read the pairing harry/severus and the severus/?? ( in later chapter) is?? past relationship or future? please email me
with the answers that i seek PLEASE.

thanks
mandy
darkpath_300@hotmail.com

Damn...

Now normally I would support Harry.... but now?

Hell I would join Remus, how could Harry do that? He should have known by the bruises that it wasn\'t consenual. And he just wiped his memory and left him on the floor?

What was that idiot thinking?

And he did all of that, to just protect his new life.

What kind of prick is he? Does he even care that he hurt him? That he raped him? Did he even stop to think about the memories, that something was wrong?

And what is going to do when he is told of Severus being hurt, that he was raped?

Is he going to confess? Is he going to hide?

I have to say, that this was very stupid.

This is why people get killed, since they don\'t have the magic like Harry, kids, teenagers, young people, who are scared of the consequences of thier actions, try to cover it up, and it just ends horribly.

What is Harry going to do when he remembers that Severus said no, that he ties in the bruises, the marks, and then when he hears about what happened to Severus.

I don\'t think this is going to end happy for anybody invovled.

He should be ashamed of himself.


Now for you the author, I like the story, I am just pissed at Harry.

I look forward to seeing what happens in this story and it unfolds and ends.

Keep up the great work, Coolsa.

Getting good, hope to read the next character soon, if not soon dent hope they are longer. Keep up the good work.

Ooo, great chapter. At least now Severus will get the help he needs.

You don\'t explain Remus\' affection for Severus, it seems that they have a history of sorts. Do they?

I think Dumbledore suspects Harry of something.....will we find out next chapter????

Please post soon, can\'t wait to read more. Hope your computer problems get fixed soon.

This is reall good. I hope you are nowhere near finished!

Harry is a rotten @$%#. Always figured he was too full of himself.

Poor Severus!

Harry .. what a git!

Are you writing more for this?

Poor Severus! I feel so sorry for him. I hope Harry feels like a heel.

How will Harry and Severus repair this \'mistake\'? It almost seems too great a despair to heal. Good writing and story line.

Please keep writing and post soon.