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for Dare You to Move

by Sarryn

schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Damn. Hot damn.
person Banner
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story - great framework and a marvellous plot device.
I like the undefined ending. I'm going to believe in a romantic progression in the future.
person Alexa
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just to remind you - we\'d LOVE a sequel!!!
person Willow
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastic and so sexy! but unresolved!!!! There should be a sequal! This is not finished yet. please?
person zentiis
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good, that was written very well with a \'fantastico\' storyline ^_^ this carefree harry was certainly refreshing. Great Work!
person Danine
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve really outdone youself here. As much as I have loved reading your works over the last few years, knowing you had a talent above most to brings words into mind, giving the reader emotion as she pores over each paragraph, I hadn\'t ever expected something as fine-tuned as this. Not only did you convey the scenes with lucid charge, but the characters themselves, no matter how OOC you feel they might be, roared into my psyche. This was gorgeous, hot, sexy, and thrilling to read. I see it as a one-shot, myself, whether it is or not; sometimes stories just are. I only ask that you write another brilliant piece and post it soon, because it\'s been far too long, my dear... far too long.

person thrnbrooke
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must continue this! I can\'t wait for chapter 2! What will Draco do? When does Harry regain his memory? What is Dumbledore up to?
person LPhoenix
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... all i can say is wow!
person Closet Skeleton
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. Wow.

I will admit that it took me considerably longer to read this story than it typically does for me, but as you peppered your story with a diction that most fic writers couldn\'t even hope to fathom, I suppose that makes a good deal of sense. I did not require the use of a dictionary once, I am pleased to say ((I would be a most pathetic English Major were I not able to decipher it. :D )) though I certainly appreciated your explanation of the name Draco assigned to Harry. While I knew about Caligula, I didn\'t understand why he would have chosen that last name, and that was most helpful.

I admit, at first, I felt that the manner in which you had written the story seemed.... pretentious, but this is, after all, your interpretation of the text and the characters, and not the typical children\'s book interpretation. Within a few minutes of reading, I found that I appreciated the unique style more. Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to stretch my mental muscles - I\'ve been feeling rather lethargic in that regard since I wrote my exams three weeks ago. I enjoyed this story, thank you.
person Morgan Le Fay
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! If you write anymore stories with such sophisticated language, I may simply have to continue reading your work to be suitably prepared for my GRE\'s