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Chapter 3: Wow, chapter three already! Nice! And the plot thickens. The witches aren't quite all as chummy as one would suppose, are they? Why is Aquila picking on Narcissa? So far, it seems unwarranted. Will we learn why Aquila feels such antipathy toward Narcissa? And how does SHE know what Narcissa feels for her husband? Is that common knowledge? Aquila saying all that in front of Draco seems even more bizarre. And rather mean of Aquila to say Draco's mother feels nothing for his father.

So Ginny Weasley enters the equation. Are the Wealeys all on Dumbledore's side? If so, then having Ginny in their stronghold may be dangerous.

Nice chapter, increasing the tension. I can't imagine what will happen next. Good work and nice writing. Thanks for the quick update!

Chapters 1-2: Your ability to build alternate realities is absolutely amazing! All the parts fit together into a coherent whole that matches canon just enough to make your story slide right into place as a true possibility. Kudos!

I also like the little touches which bring the tale to life like the little elf darning a sock in Harry's bedroom, while waiting for him to awaken.

There is a glimmer of a Harry/Draco pairing in the offing and it's obviously okay with Draco's parents. Having all the baddies turn out to be good people with loving families (especially prolific Snape - well that makes sense in any universe, he's hot) is a constant jolt. Grandfather Voldemort? Good gracious. In common with many, I think Dumbledore has been way too shortsighted in the books and movies, making one wonder if he's just 'dumb' and that's how he got his name, or if there is something more sinister about him. You're portraying the sinister avenue very well. It all clicks together.

There have been two chapters in two years. Are you going to continue this?

Hmmm *musing* this is good, and it actually does fit together. Refreshing take on something alot don't think of.

I think I am going to like this!!! I find it highly entertaining when someone takes the plot, twist it all around and does it well. You are doing it very well, exellent writing I must say:-)) I would like you to have Hermione on Harry's side, there are several reasons: First of all, I like Hermione, never been to fond of Ron, but I really like Hermione. Seccond, so many stories where the story is twisted like this, Hermione is on the "wrong" side, I would like the change. Third, she is one of the most brilliant minds, surely a brilliant mind would be able to see and aknowlegde the truth like Harry does. Fourth, I would love to have Harry keeping a friend who is a friend because they like him, not because of some scheeme made by Dumbledoore. I usually like her to be paired with Severus, since that is not an option here, maybe Remus will be available? I know it is a Harry/Draco main pairing, but some other pairings would be nice too:-) Anyway, keep up the good work, I look forward to see more of this!!!!

Well, I am glad that this plot bunny got you. I really like the way that this story starts out.. Hope that you are planning on updating it very soon.. Gina

I really hope you continue with this story, because it\'s so enjoyable and well-written. I like the fact that you decided to leave Hermione in the equation, and I\'ve never really trusted Dumbledore. I don\'t know what it is that\'s starting between Harry and Draco, but it looks like it could be fun! :-) Maybe Hermione could join?(heehee!) But seriously, keep going!

Very interesting take. I\'d love to read more.

Very interesting twist on things. Hope you continue soon.