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Chapter 8: I

Chapter 7: Well, Ginny is sorted, more plans are being made and Draco and Harry are finding each other, probably as mates for the future. The noose is tightening around Dumbledore as more people join Voldemort. I don't know how this will work out, but it's getting suspenseful.

Hello! I am assuming this story will not be continuing. I am going to remove it from my list of stories to check back on, so if you do add chapters, can you email me? I would appreciate it.
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LaBib

damn this is confusing. could you make a list of who sired which children and all that stuff, just so we know?

i wish for harry and draco to get together that would be cute.

Chapter 6: Whew! I

Chapter 5: I hope the same potion that healed Snape will be used to fix Lucius' face. Will the Weasleys all come over to Voldemort's side? I would imagine Molly would change sides in a trice if Dumbledore really attempted to murder Ginny.

That group certainly believes in marriage and especially babies. Ginny looks to be the next blushing bride. I think Voldemort may have to hold his breath about Draco and Harry, though. those two look like a pair.

I think you must like Narcissa as much as I do - that is to say, "off with her head!" but I realize that may not be an option. She passes up Lucius because he likes sex too much? How many readers will volunteer to be the newest Death Eater to get a chance at his marriage bed? Even with the facial scars? LOL The scars shouldn't affect his performance, right?

Narcissa is going from the frying pan into the fire, methinks. If she thought Lucius was too interested in sex, she may come to regret her stance. Voldemort is very powerful and one of his powers probably is stamina. Narcissa is beautiful, but very stupid. I'm glad Lucius is shot of her.

This story is heating up and getting more interesting as the 'good guys' have a bit of trouble in their ranks between Narcissa, Aquila, and Voldie. Will Narcissa try to betray them? I wonder what will happen next? This is getting suspenseful.

Oh my. Update again soon! I am really intrigued by your story. Its a welcome change when someone twist the plot around so well as you do here, I really love it:-)) I hope Ginny will be ok, being betrayed by the ones you should trust always makes me want something very good to happen for that person. So, Lucius and Narcissa is not so close, maybe there is someone else for Lucius to love and to love him back? Ginny, or maybe Hermione maybe? I do wish you will have Herminoe to be on Harrys side. First of all, she is intelligent and smart, Dumbledore and his companions dont deserve such a clever witch on their side. Seccond, I like Hermione and therefore would like her to be on the rigth side of the figth. Third, and most important, I don't want Harry to have another friend that wasn't a friend after all, I want him to know that Hermione really is his friend no matter what!!! Please update soon, I want to know what happens next!!!!

Chapter 4: Sorry I took so long to review. I was on vacation for ten days and now I'm catching up.

Family dynamics are always the most convoluted and the most interesting in stories. Aquila's dichotomy of resenting Narcissa's disinterest in her spouse while simultaneously envying her the ability to stand clear of emotions is fascinating.

Draco's comment that Harry would think any family better than none was very insightful.

I'm relieved that Harry is distrustful of Ginny's abrupt entrance to their enclave, but it sounds as though Ginny's going to be an asset, whenever she gets over whatever she's screaming about.

Ginny's full name is Ginevra, not Virginia.

Short chapter, but packed with family interactions and it moves the story forward. Nice writing.

in-ter-est-ing.... *nods thoughtfully*