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August 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! How does it end??!!
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Interesting beginning, I like your explanations of how the anomolies of the story can be explained. I don't read many stories (haven't got the time) but I wanted to connect with you! Email me!
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December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I finally made it to chapter 18. Nicely done so far. I'm glad you didn't make Harry suddenly omnipotent and you are keeping a certain level of strife to keep it interesting. Nothing gets more tedious than "everything is rosy" kind of story. I'm looking forward to the conclusion. Good job.
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have had a wonderful time reading the updates to this story. I love your plot and writing, I especially love how you brougth Luna and Neville to the rescue at the end of the chapter, if anyone could control a Dementor, Luna is the perfect candidate.
I am very much looking forward to read more.
I am very much looking forward to read more.
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found this and I really wish I had found it before! Your plot is intricate and your characterizations are completely plausible within the alternate universe you have created. Just as a side note, I LOATHE your Dumbledore, that's a nice bit of writing there. I had to laugh when Narcissa backed herself into a corner and is now bearing Voldemort's children. Now that the players are aware of each other's overall knowledge, this should get even more interesting!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, so far. Not one I would have normally read, as it is outside my normal pairing, but the plot is quite intriguing, and the characters complex. :D
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10: Oh my, Aquila is going to have an entire troop for Christmas. It will be a relief for Snape, I
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: The familiars are always the show-stealers. A fire-lizard sounds really neat. It
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your second Chapter 9: I realize Draco and Harry are starved for each other, but it was certainly bad luck to be caught out snogging. Especially by Ron. Neville was very nice. A real gentleman and a good friend. And the blowup between Aquila and Lucius was very believable. Dumbledore ate it up with a spoon.
Narcissa may be pregnant with twins? I
Narcissa may be pregnant with twins? I
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so glad to see this story update!