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by taniazed

person Queen mAlice
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
right, now get on with it! WTF is theis bet anywho?!?
person just me
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that is all i can say, wow!!! that was amazing
person Alexa
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice additions, but go over ti and fix the times - you sometimes slip into present tense when you\'re not supposed to. It disrupts the flow.
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was great
person Alexa
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great word lovin\' ! My, my, my is it hot in here or is it me. Wait, I have to go open the window. There... Why aren\'t I any cooler? Could it be that your writing is to blame?

VERY good, and I can\'t wait to find out what is the bet. Allthough I want to kill Blaise and Ron right now. You know what, I think they should suffer for this horrible interruption. Didn\'t you say Harry and Draco were pranksters now? Well, they should use their skills for revenge!

MORE!
person Kai
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending now please write more
person elecktra
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved it!! I soo can
person Shame Ness
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! How rude?
person MOI
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot. Hilarious. I loved it! What on earth is this challenge...?
person typied
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. :)