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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This definitely has potential! I\'m very curious of what is going to happen next, so I hope you\'ll update soon. By the way, I have also read Havoc of the operah. I LOVE it too.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jessica,
I am a little confused. Are you doing Phantom the book, by Gaston Laurox, the musical based on the book, the movie based on the musical, one of the many other movies, or off the play? Are they going to perform the musical or will it be the Potterverse actuallly in the story? On a diffrent note, I do like the description of the battle scene. A good start so far.
Bianca
I am a little confused. Are you doing Phantom the book, by Gaston Laurox, the musical based on the book, the movie based on the musical, one of the many other movies, or off the play? Are they going to perform the musical or will it be the Potterverse actuallly in the story? On a diffrent note, I do like the description of the battle scene. A good start so far.
Bianca
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you intend to make it a long story, full of twists and details. Your first chapter is very interesting. I mean, it\'s fast and lacking in details, but it is fully
justified as it is just a flashback to let we now where the story starts. How close to Romeo and Juliet do you intend it to be? Will there be a character by character correspondence (as in who will be Mercutio, who will be Paris, etc) or will it be just generally inspired in R&J? Your idea picked my curiosity, I hope you receive thousands of other reviews so you decide to make it a long story (please not in verse).
My best wishes,
Kabaue
justified as it is just a flashback to let we now where the story starts. How close to Romeo and Juliet do you intend it to be? Will there be a character by character correspondence (as in who will be Mercutio, who will be Paris, etc) or will it be just generally inspired in R&J? Your idea picked my curiosity, I hope you receive thousands of other reviews so you decide to make it a long story (please not in verse).
My best wishes,
Kabaue
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve watched and read your reviews of soooo many others here, that I totally forgot that you write too. Silly me! Of course you write, and it\'s sooooo gooood toooo.
This starts out great, how can it not be with Voldemort dead? He is dead right??????Never to return??????No more deatheater meetings and crucio\'s????
Does Albus live or is he crippled? Do the remaining, if any, Deatheaters take revenge on Severus? How does Harry\'s and Severus\' friendship develop???? Yes answer this last one first, please.
Sorry to hear about your broken fingers, but your typing is fine. After all, exercise is a good thing!
Post more and often. Thanks for the trip.
This starts out great, how can it not be with Voldemort dead? He is dead right??????Never to return??????No more deatheater meetings and crucio\'s????
Does Albus live or is he crippled? Do the remaining, if any, Deatheaters take revenge on Severus? How does Harry\'s and Severus\' friendship develop???? Yes answer this last one first, please.
Sorry to hear about your broken fingers, but your typing is fine. After all, exercise is a good thing!
Post more and often. Thanks for the trip.
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice start. I like that you have described the fight with Voldemort. To many people just say h is dead and that`s that.
Keep writting.
Keep writting.
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... seems good, and I must admit I am intrigued about the whole, Romeo and Julian thing. Hope theres gonna be some Snarry later though. Oh, longer chaps please!!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love what youve done so far. Amazing version of the battle scene, i loved the way Severus saved Harry from his death. And how Harry was enraged when Snape was hurt. So cute, I cant wait to see more.
Beany
Beany